0701: A Six Sentence Story

bubbles and swirling water in a jacuzzi

Clinging to Small Solid Facts in Six Sentences

We talk about Venezuela, as if naming it might steady the water, and I drift in the jacuzzi like a bubble, briefly convinced of my own shape.

I mention that Einstein had flat feet — facts don’t ask questions because saying something solid feels like ballast against a world that won’t slow by force or reason.

My grandson sits by the pool and cries because I leave on Monday; the future has already begun without asking him. I tell him life is made of goodbyes but stocked with more hellos than sorrow can carry, and to practice noticing those first.

The bubble spins, rises, sinks, flashing like a sunlit diamond pretending permanence. It goes too far, too fast, and disappears — not broken, not taken, only released, having finally learned what it was.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “force”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2026.

21 responses to “0701: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. Deep ink, superb soundtrack.

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    1. Thank you. And it all started with a whisper from the clouds.

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  2. I love what this solidified into. Wonderful writing!

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    1. Thank you so much, Violet. I’m so glad that you enjoyed reading both of them.

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  3. What a beautiful gift to give to your grandson!

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    1. He’s a very extraordinary boy who has his fist around my heart.

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      1. He knows where he’s safe and loved. Good job, Gramma!

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  4. Wonderful gift for your grandson 🙌

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    1. (smiling) HE is the gift imo.

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  5. Good advice: “life is made of goodbyes but stocked with more hellos than sorrow can carry”

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    1. Thanks for the lovely comment, Frank.

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  6. What a joy with that sweet grandson, M.

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    1. He is a joy, and when he smiles, the whole world lights up.

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  7. Damn!*

    All Hail Eris**

    *compliment on what arguably are the two strongest sentences (of a Six Sentence Story) I have read in a very, very long time.

    ** borrowed from a most wonderful book by Robert Anton Wilson & Robert Shea

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    1. Thank you so very much, Clark.

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  8. […] for the jacuzzi that inspired this week’s  Six Sentence Story and its Liturgy mind-mapping […]

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  9. I pray he will learn to notice the hellos first.

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  10. Beautifully written, Misky. Those are the moments that solidify all others in your grandson’s heart.

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