30.12: Six Sentence Story

nightjar

It Sings at Night

At dusk, on the edge of a pond bordered by palms and deciduous trees that have forgotten how to lose their leaves, a call rises only at night that sounds like a woodpecker at work.

There are, however, no woodpeckers in the forest of Anapoima, Colombia. This is a goatsucker; a nightjar, all silent wings and hungry moon-shaped mouth, and it goes on and on like a wound clock, its sound patient and hollow, as if the trees themselves have learned to knock back.

“It’s a frog,” someone suggests, “No,” another insists, “an owl that’s forgotten how to hoot,” and the night listens politely to these human whispers …and answers only with knocks, with staccato stitches sewing the dark together.

The call returns, an echo with teeth, tapping out a code only the shadows understand: goatsucker, potoo, chupacabra, nightjar —names that cling to opposite sides of the thin line between biology and nightmare.

By morning I know it’s a goatsucker — a myth named, its spell undone, but I keep the memory of that patient, hollow knock.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “echo”. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

16 responses to “30.12: Six Sentence Story”

  1. Those are absolutely some ominous sounding names for Columbian wildlife!

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    1. Most of the mythology behind this bird is rooted in medieval European misunderstanding, that it doesn’t steal milk from the udders from goats or cows, but that it was looking for insects there. But its call is so interesting!

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  2. Eerie! Knowing the name a mythology around a name does a little to dispel its existence on the liminal edge…😉. Stay spooky, my friends!

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    1. Always, Liz, spooky as can be!

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  3. There are so many amazing creatures, and often the truth about them is even stranger than the things people have made up.

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    1. There’s one whose song sounds like a snow shovel scraping pavement. Haven’t found it yet though. 😂

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  4. How wonderful and rather scary. I love myths and legends… wherever they are.

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    1. saw a cobayo (a huge guinea pig) walk across the lawn this morning!!

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      1. Beats several guinea fowls in my garden. Messy birds!

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        1. In Sussex, we keep those in the frozen meat aisle. 😂

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  5. “…an echo with teeth, tapping out a code only the shadows understand.”

    skill in prompt use of the first water!

    (love the imagery)

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    1. 😀 many thanks, Clark!

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  6. There’s something about the evening that accentuates the sounds of nocturnal creatures. More pronounced if visiting an unfamiliar part of the country or in your case, an altogether different country. Their calls made all the more eerie for not seeing them. It’s no wonder myths and legends are formed, imagination is magnified in the dark of night!

    The call returns, an echo with teeth,…” Wonderful use of the prompt word, Misky.

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    1. These cicadas are driving my brain into craziness! What a sound; like metal on metal. But what a beautiful country it is. ❤️

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  7. I like the thought of those knocks “sewing the dark together”.

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    1. Thank you, Frank!

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