9.12: Six Sentence Story

ai image of Colombia, woman walking down a dirt lane with old houses and the Andes in the background

Hols with an O Not a U

Brigid sits near the electric space heater — warmth feeling like salvation as it chases the damp chill off the floorboards.

And there’s a pigeon in the birdbath: it lifts its left wing into the gauzy rain (sheets of it falling, half-translucent), splashing about as if the rain bouncing off the flagstones wasn’t already doing a fine job on its feathers; then it lifts its right wing, offering it up like a supplicant.

She stares past the near-distance at nothing in particular; her elbows a tripod, her chin cupped in her palms, while the crow paces the edge of her desk, muttering in soft, gravelly disapproval.

Brigid sighs, “We need a holiday — somewhere far away, where I can shed these layers of winter clothes… somewhere warm, where a drink with ice makes you dead-sick for weeks.”

“Cawck,” croaks the crow, and she laughs, “No — Colombia. With an O, not a U,” and she reaches for her largest suitcase on top of the wardrobe.

“Pack a bag, crow — we’re going on holiday; we’ll gag politely on Christmas tamales.”


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “shed”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

17 responses to “9.12: Six Sentence Story”

  1. Que tengas un buen viaje y hermosos recuerdos.

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    1. So lovely. And thank you. 🙏

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  2. Since moving to Alaska from California- I am dying for a real homemade tamale- just saying. I love this ongoing story. Your writing is bar none. And what a great song as played on the pan flute!

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    1. I can’t stomach them! It’s a real problem for me because the DIL’s family spend a long time making them by hand, and here I am hardly coping at all with the texture of them. Argh!

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  3. May Brigid and crow have a wonderful holiday! Say, perhaps crow will offer to eat Brigid’s tamales 😊

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    1. Thank you, Denise. Yes, crow — he is the solution to most predicaments.

      Happy Christmas to you.

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  4. Es una buena idea! Feliz Navidad, y saludos a tu familia.

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    1. Thank you, Mimi, and a very happy birthday to you and your family also.

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  5. Ahh delightful… I have got that song, and I have been to Chile (long time ago) – even saw a couple of condors way up!! Enjoy your break – Feliz Navidad🎅

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    1. They are absolutely huge, aren’t they! Amazing birds.

      A very happy Christmas to you, too, and all those you hold dear, Chris.

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  6. Nice description of Brigid staring into the distance to the annoyance of her crow. The vacation sounds like the beginning of a new adventure.

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    1. Thank you, Frank. Merry Christmas!

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  7. Warm is good.

    (Envy those on the upside-down half of the globe at this time of year).

    Like all good Sixes… the Reader has an option on enjoying a different reality, no matter how briefly.

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    1. It’s all good fun, for me, and hopefully the reader, too.

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  8. I’d pack up a rucksack, roll up the kitty, and head your way to Colombia, but it’s sunny and poised to hit 40⁰ today, so I want to unzip my parka and watch ladt week’s blizzards melt and flow!

    This was so beautiful & present, btw! 🩷🩷

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    1. Thanks, Liz. Exciting weather here today. The most impressive electrical storm I’ve seen in years. It usually buckets-down rain every afternoon here – temps averaging around 20C. Like a spring day except for when lightning blows out all the communications and electricity in town.

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