2.12: Six Sentence Story

ai brigid's florist shop with the crow walking across the street

At the Intersection of Odd Numbers

Bon Appétit — The Pepperbright Canticle

The bell above the door startles itself into a shriek of fingernails on a chalkboard as a woman, trailed by a rosy-nosed child in a cat-eared hat, ignores the door slamming shut behind her and asks, “What do you have for a dinner party?”

“For the table or to eat?” says Brigid, matching the woman’s tone and sipping her tea, which has dropped to the temperature of a snowstorm; “Both,” the woman replies, flat as someone signing a contract without a pen.

“Excellent,” Brigid nods, “nasturtiums, borage, pansies with pretty faces, marigolds…”
            “…pee-yoo,” interrupts the woman, curling a lip, “they smell like an old woman’s medicine cabinet got rained on,” and Brigid smooths the air with a grin: “That’s the scent of damp, fertile earth and wet copper coins, love.”

The floral centrepiece begins to build itself in words and gestures, in width, height, colour, fire — and Brigid adds, “Salad dressing’s not included; seventy-five percent deposit, and when do you want it delivered?”

The child sniffs a small brass bowl of dried herbs, sneezes, and blows debris across the table before asking, “What’s this stuff?”

“Damiana,” winks Brigid, “doesn’t do much, just makes you more likely to tell the truth — and ask for dessert.”

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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “pen”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

22 responses to “2.12: Six Sentence Story”

  1. This is a glorious poem Misky.

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    1. Thank you, Paul.

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      1. So welcome ❤️

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  2. I think Brigid has more patience than I do…..

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    1. A sense of humour helps in all things, she would say.

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  3. Ah… the immeasurable patience one has to have when in ” service” business.

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    1. Wong Kei, a Chinese restaurant in London, is famously known for its rude staff, and its reputation made it a tourist attraction. A few years ago, they changed their approach to one less rude, and the clientele dropped off. They’re back to being rude again.

      I don’t think Brigid has it in her to be rude.

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  4. Truth-telling and dessert? I’ll take a loose fist full of that magic, please!

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    1. Looks just like something from a spice rack! 🤣

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  5. I like the thought that Damiana, whatever that is, makes one more likely to tell the truth.

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    1. Damiana is a small, woody shrub that produces aromatic flowers, and in late summer produces fruits that taste similar to figs.

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  6. Bridget is a true professional 🙌

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    1. Indeed she is, Ange. (smiling)

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  7. I’m smiling so much about what you have written, M. Just to say I have some borage in my garden and it’s just flowered – great for making a couple of G and Ts!

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    1. (returning smile) Pretty frozen in ice cubes, too.

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  8. like getting the latest Sears & Roebuck catalog in the mail…’cept for words and terms and such! v cool

    (time keeps on slippin’, slippin’, slippin,
    …into the future*)

    *Steve Miller 1976 ‘Fly Like a Beagle’

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    1. An absolutely lovely comment (and I love that song). Thank you, Clark.

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  9. Great customer service to not-very-nice customers is a sign of a lot of things, all of them very good personality traits to have.

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    1. Thank you, Mimi, she tries as best as she can.

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  10. A perfect soundtrack, so Brigid this day, even the woman’s child did not irritate her. She was in her zone and no one was going to take her out of it. Bravo!

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    1. Thank you, Denise.
      There are some days when the cosmos decides to shine on you, and there’s just no escaping it.

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