Day 23 NovPAD Challenge

ai image. A rain-soaked English cul-de-sac in black and white, with old brick houses, bare winter trees, slick cobblestones, and a lone figure walking in the distance.

The Architecture of a Moment

Notes: Rooted in the oldest English tradition, Anglo-Saxon accentual verse follows the rhythm of breath and heartbeat rather than syllable or rhyme, where meaning is carried by cadence, image, and pause.

The Architecture of a Bell (long form)

Mum had a bronze dinner bell.
She’d shake a frantic tune
from its metal throat,
and we’d come flying,
fledglings called to the feed,
wings beating
against the bluster of her winter.

She was a constant weather system,
a low-pressure warning
moving through the house.
And one day, the damned bell,
as Dad called it, went missing.
A quiet conspiracy
of children.

Her response wasn’t a question,
but a ritual.
Without a sound,
at the appointed hour,
we still swooped in,
crows called to a late feed,
a flock answering
a ghost.

And Mum never spoke of it.
Her silence
became a gentler bell.

Years later, when I moved away,
Dad, with a slow, knowing hand,
dropped the cold bronze weight
into my suitcase.
A dormant seed
of a family’s complicated love.

Now it sits on my shelf,
a sculpture of a memory
I cannot ring.
Its silence
the truest tune
it ever played.


The Architecture of a Bell (Anglo-Saxon Accentual Verse)

Bronze-throat bell,
Mum’s sharp summons —
she shook storms
into the supper hour.

We flew like fledglings,
hearts wind-battered,
beating our wings
through her winter mood.

Pressure rising,
weather in the walls;
one day the bell
vanished quietly.

Silent response —
a ritual born:
we came anyway,
ghosts to the call.

Mum said nothing,
her hush a kindness;
silence ringing
where metal once ruled.

When I left home,
Dad’s knowing hand
slipped the cold weight
in my suitcase,
a bronze seed
of tangled love.
Now it rests waiting,
mute on my shelf —

its stillness sounding
the truest truth.


Written for Writers’ Digest Poem-a-Day Challenge, prompt word Response. Poems/prose, some AI/images ©Misky 2006-2025.

4 responses to “Day 23 NovPAD Challenge”

  1. Of mothers & fathers.

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    1. Aye. How perfect, those 3 letters.

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  2. This one knocked the wind out of me. What a brilliant capture….

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    1. Many thanks. I hope you’re breathing again.

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