18.11: At the Intersection of Odd Numbers

A Black That Remembers

Brigid had the office door painted Vantablack; she loved this colour, it was so dark it erased everything but consequence.

Customers slowed in caution as they passed it, uncertain whether it was a surface or a hole; the crow croaked “wormhole” at it endlessly, and Pierre swore he heard a slow, deliberate ring … like someone waiting to be welcomed in.

When Brigid opened that door, the light folded back on itself before following her in, like a dog afraid of thunder — but once inside, the walls waited in their ordinary matte-flat whiteness.

Yet everyone who stepped across the threshold swore the room had swallowed them whole.

“Vantablack,” Brigid told Pierre, “is a reminder that not even light is safe from darkness,” (…he still refused to go near it when it was closed).

“Cette satanée porte,” he’d mutter, glancing over his shoulder, “the dark has learned my name.”

Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “ring“.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

24 responses to “18.11: At the Intersection of Odd Numbers”

  1. I normally don’t use comments to recite incidents from my life but your Six, Marilyn, warrants it. Here is why:
    Years ago I was at boutique resort complex in Asia; there was a pool and after it the jungle, which was surrounding the area.
    At the end of the pool area, there was a simple structure – big, about 6 meters high, white, Π shaped, from cement. Sitting underneath that ” gate” you could either face the pool or face the jungle.
    So, it was night time and I decided to do an experiment.
    As the rest of our group were swimming or relaxing by the pool, I went and sat underneath the gate ( see, I was always a Gatekeeper… even before I realized it), facing the dark jungle, and started to meditate.
    After 10 minutes, I got up and asked the others one by one to come stand there.

    I am telling you… no one did.
    The effect of the Gate, me meditating underneath it, along with the darkness and sounds of the jungle, made them back down having shivers.

    You see, Marilyn… Ritual is a powerful thing and it hinges on the farthest corners of human soul with archetypical intensity.
    Not unlike a simple door painted black in Floriconica.

    ( I believe I have exhausted my word count for this year!)

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    1. The year is nearly finished, gatekeeper, and you still have an abundance of alphabet dangling off you. (ha!) 

      You know me very well, and you’ll know that this does not surprise me. Sitting under an open, Π-shaped portal (by definition, an invitation to the liminal) whilst in a deep meditative state, would increase your own energetic field. This is not ‘poo-haah’ (I can hear my grandmother say). It’s the electromagnetic field around the body (proof: EEGs can measure it), and even people who are mildly sensitive notice something shifts in the air. What shifts is a natural energetic threshold. Structures, as you describe, are deliberately built to mark boundaries ‘between worlds’ (some readers will switch off here, no doubt), and by its very motionlessness it “activates” such a spot. A threshold. Most people aren’t afraid of jungle animals in a fenced resort setting, therefore it is safe to surmise that “shivers” is an instinctive “no way” reaction to a subtle-energy alarm bell, like when a room suddenly feels “heavy” after an argument, and the body registers the shift before the mind can explain it.

      If I may turn this toward my beloved grandmother, she believed there are gatekeeepers (thresholds) and there are keys. I doubt that I need to drill down further on that point. 

      Have you ever noticed, N, that in temples or churches that when a person who’s praying or meditating leaves where they sat, that (for a short while) no one will sit in that same exact spot. An energetic threshold. 

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  2. Lovely six- and Oooo that video was wonderful! I have never seen any of those Wednesday Addams movies.

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    1. i’ve not seen any of the movies either, but I grew up with the original television series which was enormous fun.

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      1. I loved Morticia! I wanted to be her!

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        1. She was an amazing character for sure. No one has been able to match her performances since.

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  3. Wondaful write, and the version of Paint it Black is the perfect backdrop stunning🙌

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    1. Thank you so very much! Glad you enjoyed both story and music.

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  4. Pauvre Pierre. Never do we want the darkness to know our name. Bet he won’t be a frequent visitor to the shop!
    Love your choice for musical accompaniment, Misky.

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    1. Denise, you always see the things worth seeing. 🥰
      Brigid’s Vantablack door isn’t a menace. It’s a threshold of absolutes; a surface where colour, shadow, negatives, and distraction collapse into nothing and fall silent so one can focus clearly. Pierre, at least, knows better than to fear a clean slate.

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  5. At least the walls inside the office were white. That black “satanée porte” where not even light was safe reminded me of a tour in a cavern. We were seated in an open underground area and the tour guide let us know that he was going to turn off the lights. When he did space itself seemed to collapse in on our eyes. Thankfully he didn’t leave us in the dark for long.

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    1. And that’s the funny thing about light. Without reflection and refraction, light is invisible. The edges of our world disappear. What an extraordinary experience you had in that cave!

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  6. very effective Six

    the whole darkness as a quality of the world as opposed to merely the absence of light is so seductive

    very cool Six

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    1. Thank you, Clark.

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  7. There are places it’s hard to go, I can see how Pierre would not want to go past the door.

    Yes, sometimes even the cat is cautious walking past where I’ve been praying.

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    1. That intuitive caution is deeply ingrained in us, Mimi … it’s primordial. Animals don’t ignore the feeling either.

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  8. i loved how you described it….

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    1. Thank you so very much!

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  9. So many layers, Misty! Loved it all. But the best bit was those small gargoyles – perfect timing too!

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    1. Thank you! And thank you, gargoyles!

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  10. You really stirred up a lot of thought in your readers. Reading the comments, I think I’ll just “listen.”

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    1. And tomorrow starts a new Six week!

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