23.10: The Past is a Foreign Country

ai image: woman walking through stormy sea and waves B&W

The Past is a Foreign Country

‘stood beside my grandmother’s grave,
one stone of granite, shown and marked,
where I, when young caught lightning bugs.

Tell me again that saying her name
is like a warmth,
a hug,
a mug of steaming tea.
Tell me again that she loved me.

Take me to her altar,
her little shrine
safe above the tide-line.
Take me where I am kissed by sea
where my thoughts
are hollowed
by the tide.

Send me off in lace and ribbon,
my fingers heavy,
led by hers.
Send me walking,
footprints on the shore,
while the tide rises
around my head.

And I will tell you — she raised me well.
I will tell you that she held me,
told me to ride
the hollowing tide,
and not leave footprints
on the curs’ed floor.

Tell me the past is a foreign country;
they do things differently there,
where tides raise hell around my head,
where I’ll raise hell amongst the dead.


Written for Violet’s “Every Bite — An Adventure, including the phrase The past is a foreign country; they do things differently there.”– L.P. Hartley, The Go Between. Words: 161. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

8 responses to “23.10: The Past is a Foreign Country”

  1. Aye, Marilyn.

    “I find strength
    in the mould and in the murk
    That which costs you deeply, rewards you deeply”

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    1. We are all seeds, growing, N. Some understanding what growing means; others not. Thank you deeply for your comment.

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  2. Misky! I am honored that you replied so quickly and with such a haunting tale. Ever since I saw the old black and white movie- A Star is Born (1937) I have always thought walking fully clothed into the sea was such a dramatically romantic way to die- so you know I love this!

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    1. Aaah, but “she” doesn’t die — she has a lifetime ahead of her.

      I had a good laugh when your email notification arrived; the word “macabre” jumping at me. I suppose I am, a bit. To some.

      I read your posts from email notifications in an app that is either black on white font or white on black font, often replying using the same app, but I can’t do a link back in the app (unfortunately). Please don’t change your theme on my account; the colours are well suited to your moniker ‘Violet’.

      I’m glad that you enjoyed this response to your prompt, and hope that you’ll make that a regular feature.

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      1. I just took a dip into the free themes offered and couldn’t find one I liked better. So that will not be happening right now anyway. I really enjoy this challenge, and it fits so well with the six sentence story- so I will be offering it. Thank you for joining in.

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        1. Don’t change it, V. Myown silly sight shouldn’t determine your choice of theme. I’m using my app to type this reply, and it works fine for me. ❤️

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    1. Thank you very much, Paul. Glad you enjoyed it.

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