22.10: A Six – The Book of 27

ai image representing the coastguard cottages at Beachy Head, Sussex UK
24 – Briarthrest: The restlessness that follows after healing

Of All the Goodbyes

Brigid stands in the doorway of a house she once called hers.

Behind her: packed books, a pair of curtains that never quite fit the windows, two chipped mugs (left not in carelessness, but filled with gratitude and the faint spice of shared mornings).

Felreil waits at the edge of the drive, still as dusk, watching the way her shadow follows her; it stays close, like it’s been hers longer than she knows.

She turns once, not to see, but to feel, and something in her chest shifts, not pain, but the soft pressure of having once belonged.

The wind doesn’t blow, yet the tall grass moves anyway, offering no omen, only permission to leave, and when she walks away, the gravel keeps no record of her step.

Briarthrest curls in the footprints anyway; the 24th colour: all the goodbyes that don’t shatter when you say them.


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “spice”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

16 responses to “22.10: A Six – The Book of 27”

  1. Nice phrases: “the gravel keeps no record of her step” and “all the goodbyes that don’t shatter when you say them”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  2. Brilliant write, I especially love this ‘She turns once, not to see, but to feel, and something in her chest shifts, not pain, but the soft pressure of having once belonged’ And the track is wonderful🙌

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    1. Thank you so very much!

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    1. Thank you so very much.

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  3. You have captured the essence of returning to a place remembered with fondness in this phrase- but the soft pressure of having once belonged. Loved this.

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    1. I’ve lived in quite a few different places, so it’s an easy one to put into words. I’m glad you liked it, Violet. Thank you.

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  4. Breathtaking, Misky. Every sentence infused with (an) emotion. Each sentence a piece of Brigid. Another life chapter annexed.

    (I read your story, then listened, then read with song playing. Total package 😎)

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    1. Oh, I am so pleased that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you

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  5. That was me, Misky. I was Anonymous. Swear I was logged in, lol.

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    1. WordPress can be silly at times.

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  6. So many places I don’t belong any more, it’s hard to count.

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    1. But remembering those places is to revisit them (in a way). Thank you for stopping by and leaving your comment, Mimi.

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  7. surely one of the most durable of life’s emotional ‘extremes’ leaving (a house, a home, a person)… very effectively etched

    good Six

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  8. Not belonging does not equal becoming irrelevant, there’s grief preceding the moving on in search of a different place, to grow, to rest, to heal.

    Your prose poetry astounds.

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