14.10: A Six – The Book of 27

interior of a cottage with cosy furnishings and view to seashore
23 of 27 — Wraithborne: A Glance Mistaken for Something Else

The Taste of Almost

Brigid notices the smudge first — a violet-ash on her teacup’s rim, still warm, the shape of a thumbprint, the weight of an unfinished thought — and this would mean nothing, except she lives alone, and has done for many years.

Felreil, all innocence and oil-slick feathers, swears it’s not his doing — yet the underside of his left wing bears the same bruised hue, soft as a secret slipped into a stranger’s coat.

She lifts the cup to her lips: it tastes of almost — almost the memory of her own handwriting, almost a child’s laugh echoing through the house that’s forgotten it had rooms, almost the scent of violets the year they stopped blooming.

That night, her reflection catches her off-guard — not menacing; not mimicking, but mouthing words she didn’t say: “I wore your life like silk, while you wore it like penance.”

At dawn, Felreil drops a thread into her palm — not silk, not string, something older — something violet-ash and warm, and she remembers it being part of her: “For the next life,” he croaks, voice raw with déjà vu.

She knots it around her wrist, feeling the small tug of something that almost calls to her, still needs her, and the mirror shivers like a held breath.


Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Need”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

18 responses to “14.10: A Six – The Book of 27”

  1. Brava, M. Ink full of heart & soul.

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    1. Thank you. Many, many thanks.

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  2. Nice contrast in this: “I wore your life like silk, while you wore it like penance.”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  3. Beautifully done… love the violet-ash colour. Also love that wonderful view – right by the beach on your photo!

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    1. Thank you, Chris. (smiling) Sussex is a real gem, for sure. I’m so pleased that you enjoyed reading this one. So it Brigid.

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  4. Quite the journey into lilac-tinged violet hued self-discovery. Brilliant piece of writing.

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    1. Delighted you enjoyed it, as coming from you, a talented storyteller … well, that’s a lovely comment. Thank you.

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  5. This is tingly good Misky and I love the track – I had not heard it before she has such a great sound 🙌

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    1. Thank you! And isn’t she just wonderful! I love listening to her sing.

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  6. Penance, now there’s a word fraught with peril. How much will ever be enough?

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    1. Indeed it is, Mimi.

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  7. I can’t even choose a “fave” (as I like to do) because every phrase and sentence is golden.

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    1. What a lovely comment – thank you!

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      1. You’re most welcome.

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  8.  “…life …, while you wore it like penance.”

    damn!

    (half a fricken novel in seven words!)

    engage your Readers much?

    lol

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    1. Glad you liked reading it. Thank you!

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