25.09: A Six Sentence Story

a small girl dressed in ballerina dress and holding a teddy bear

Seven

Seven: prime, indivisible, stubbornly herself.

She is a parenthesis of grace, a question mark of sunlight — “Can you do this?” she asks as she unfolds into a perfect split on the kitchen tiles, a compass toward joy and impossibility.

Her hair is a midnight river streaked with ribbons — not just purple, but twilight’s crown-purple, the colour that holds back the dark.

She is mermaid, fin kicking foam; dancer, pirouetting to music only she hears; rider of horses painted with constellations, manes of wind, leaping just high enough for earth to let go.

Bright, smart, clever — spark of hidden passages, castles built from cushions, and the choice of which story should live inside.

She is seven — Luisa, the daughter of my son, a universe.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “choice”.   Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

18 responses to “25.09: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. ( and expert staircase slider!)

    What a gift to have a nana as you… she will realize it later on.

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    1. … and all because the woman is a dog with a bone. 😂 🦴🐕‍🦺

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  2. Oh to be a girl of seven again- where everything is possible- and the options are limitless.

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    1. So true. So very true.

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  3. Nice description of a purple twilight: “the colour that holds back the dark”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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    1. Thank you, Tina!

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  4. Ahh, seven… a lovely age – the ideal time to make castles with cushions!

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    1. It really is a fun age!

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  5. Wow. My granddaughter is one, so bright and full of possibility, it’s a joy to watch them grow, isn’t it.

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    1. It is what makes life joyful. ❤️

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  6. Grandbabies make life beautiful!

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  7. You paint a lovely picture of your granddaughter so poetic, very beautiful Misky 💕

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    1. Thank you, Ange.

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