24 Sept: 2 Petals

petals floating on a pond

I.
Petals on the Wind (a Jueju-style poem)

A single petal drifts across the stone,
spring’s voice fading in the hush of moss.
No hand has touched it, yet still it falls —
just like a heart lets go, and is alone.

II.
Petals Fall Without Asking
(a Ci-style lyrical poem)

The scent still clings to the sleeve,
though the hand that touched the blossoms is gone.
Petals fall without asking —
not for the wind,
not for the sky.

Only the earth welcomes them,
soft as remembering.
I lean at the railing,
watching the pond hold their drifting.

One petal,
then another —
no sound but my breath
and the hush between thoughts.

If I could gather them back —
every word left unsaid,
every glance turned aside —
I would still let them fall,
slowly,
the way we let go
when love was enough.


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2 responses to “24 Sept: 2 Petals”

  1. I am glad you are exploring Tang dynasty poetry, M; besides being quite influential to other Asian cultures beyond the Chinese, its brevity and structure has always allowed a vast array of themes: from landscape to emotion to philosophy.
    Brava.
    ( always a sign of a young spirit when exploring new territory)

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  2. I like that the poetry of this era was based around melody, song, and this was the poet’s constraint: characters (not words but characters), and the importance of symmetry — but also emotions and concepts existing without being mentioned within negative space (an extension of illustrations and paintings which aimed for the same). Poets constrained lines based on the rhythmic structure of song, and although the actual songs are lost to time, the rhythm/beat still remains. Short lines spoke of concrete items or concepts, and long lines reflected the “shape of absence” or as I call it “the lyrics of absence” … (truly, there are no coincidences).

    Perhaps so, AO.

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