21 Sept: A Wuyan Poem

A Gushi Wuyan Style Poem

Bend of the road ahead,
shadows dissolve in air.
One tree leans toward silence,
clouds drift without return.

The path forgets its start,
grass leans against the wind.
I walk, not asking where,
only the sky replies.

Note: this poem is written in the Wuyan (五言) style, an ancient form of Chinese verse. Wuyan literally means “five words,” reflecting its origin in classical poetry composed of five characters per line. The style, especially in its freer gushi (古诗, ancient-style verse, which this is) form, favours imagery, rhythm, and suggestion over strict rhyme or meter. Often used for landscapes, travel, and meditation, Wuyan poems distill experience into spare, vivid lines that leave space for silence and reflection. (ref: Wikipedia)


Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

6 responses to “21 Sept: A Wuyan Poem”

  1. Brava!
    Echoes of Li Bai :” We sit together, the mountain and me, until only the mountain remains.”

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    1. I’ve been reading about Tang and Chang Dynasty 5 character poems done in 8 lines. It calls very much to the way I like to write nature poetry. I’m very pleased that you enjoyed it. It won’t be to everyone’s taste (nor am I, actually) because it’s clipped and can feel disjointed and brutal — but it’s truth, distilled, and I like that.

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  2. Such tangible imagery.

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    1. It is, that’s true, Violet.

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  3. Excellent ❤️

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