19 Sept: A Six Sentence Story

Crow

A crow bows its head over a weathered day, hooked beak probing this, that, and memory. Its black ribs stitch the horizon as rain threads the air, dissolving the field beyond into a smudge of ash.

Crow, pilot of the deepening gloom. Crow blackness of feathers drinking in greyness — a moving void against the pale wash.

He keeps himself to himself, like a secret, like a book closed from the inside.

And all around it, the world unravels slowly — slack rope, slow breath — yet here, on this fence post, a single dark insistence refuses to be smoothed away.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “pilot”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

19 responses to “19 Sept: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. Love this. The most prevalent bird in my area is the Raven- and when you said- himself to himself, like a secret, like a book closed from the inside.- my mind said “exactly.”

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    1. I have a crow who looks for me through the window every morning, timed precisely to my arrival in the kitchen. When I’m in the garden, it appears again, and hops along next to me. It has several white feathers, making it a “pied crow” – they are not the “usual” crow.

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    1. I love that! BTW, my crow shouts at P. Neither is particularly impressed with the other. 🤣

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  2. I’m impressed and a bit envious how you post something everyday. I hear there’re is such a thing as writer’s block, but I can’t even get to that level. For me I simply lack the inspiration to write anything like a daily post. My college journals thirty years ago are a testament to that. Thanks for your blog. I love it.

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    1. Don’t be too impressed; sometimes I write 2 or 3 things a day, in which case I schedule them so it appears that I’m a little machine spitting out stuff daily. In truth, I do write every day, and it often doesn’t see the light of day. Oh, and, IMO there’s no such thing as “writer’s block” — just write: anything; whatever you see. It’s a habit.

      And I’m absolutely delighted to know that you like what you read here. Thank you!

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  3. Bravo, 5-Star (as usual)!!

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    1. Thank you, Rene. That’s lovely to read.

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      1. My pleasure–you’re welcome.

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  4. Nice description of someone who keeps to himself like a secret: “like a book closed from the inside”

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  5. That wonderful phrase about the closed book – excellent. Plus, the fact that it so very deep.

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris. I’m delighted that you enjoyed reading it.

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  6. (Frank did it again! Stepped on my Comment!! rrr) lol

    but the thing about the line:

    like a book closed from the inside.

    that I like was that it manages to be both noun and verb (ish)

    sure a static image, we’ve all done that, but the hint of being inside and pulled closed the covers that takes a certain special talent

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    1. What a lovely compliment! Thank you.

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  7. Time moves fast and slow, the crow is the anchor, the punctuation mark around which it flows. Mysteroousxand dark…damn I love your prose poetry!

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    1. I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading it, Liz. Thank you.

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  8. The crows and ravens are my favorites. “Smarter than the average bear,” or bird.

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    1. Oh they are! They are! Did you see the video that Nick posted at the top of these comments?

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