16 Sept: A Six Sentence Story

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The Book of 27, The 20th Glyph: Cindertide
Anger that forgot what it was fighting

The Syrup

“Auntie, may I have the syrup, please?” — my nephew, hair the colour of reef-sand, still damp with strawberry shampoo, the first to call me auntie, the first to make me feel it fit; “Yes, of course, love,” I say, and set the bottle into his hand.

His mother’s voice cuts sharp: “I’m his mother — not you — and I’ll decide if my son can have more syrup or not.”

I rise from the table and slip into the ladies’ toilet, where my sobs come thick and shuddering — not for her words, but for the hollowness my body remembers: the echo in my hips, the phantom weight in my arms.

The syrup isn’t syrup — it is everything I cannot hold; her anger isn’t anger — it is the armour she wears against my grief too vast to name.

I didn’t weep for the children I miscarried — I wept for the mother I couldn’t be, in a world that kept offering syrup I was never allowed to pour.

And as I sat in that stall, ash in my throat and salt on my hands, Felreil piloted his shadow across the tiles, his wings echoing: “The fury was never hers alone.”


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Pilot”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

24 responses to “16 Sept: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. Anger as protection, when vulnerability is too dangerous to allow one’s self. Beautifully expressed.

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    1. Thank you so much, Liz.

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  2. This was brilliantly crafted! And where on earth do you find this music- I wouldn’t even know what to google to get me there!

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    1. I listen to a very wide variety of music. But this song? It pulls on my Nordic roots; I love it.

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  3. From wound to memory… from memory to ink… from ink to waves… from waves to Hertan.
    Brava, M – SI.

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    1. Aye. Exactly. Impermanence. Thank you, AO.

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  4. Oh my…this really got to me…I felt it so strongly (though I can’t relate personally).

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    1. Thank you, Rene.

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  5. So sad to have to feel this pain

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    1. It all worked out in the end – you’ll see next week!

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  6. lovely….!!! enjoyed reading it…

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    1. Thank you very much, Nandini.

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  7. So, so sad, but beautifully written.

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    1. Thanks, Chris. See you next week when you’ll learn what happens next.

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  8. That is so beautifully written and the music is outstanding, has a feel of the mystical old world🙌 I found a translation of the lyrics this part in particular is so effective:

    ‘Like a tree
    I shed leaves
    Like a fish returning home
    I swim upstream
    From light to womb
    I hibernate with bears!’ ❤️

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    1. Everything he does, whether writing, singing, or producing, I love listening to. I’m glad you enjoyed it, and took the time to discover the lyrics.

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  9. Hailing as I do from the Land of Y-Chromia, I am inclined to say this Six’s (female) antagonist is a bit of a dick or, for any apologists she may have, ‘sorely lacking in compassion’.

    (As to her anger being armor… the complaint of a weak, clinging to the selfish person’s insistence on the primacy of their own feelings.)

    good Six though

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    1. Yes, I concur, and she’s still a bit of a challenge. Age hasn’t mellowed her much.

      Glad you enjoyed reading it, Clark.

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  10. I know the hollowness, the echo, the phantom weight — I called it feeling my arms would break from the weight of the empty air they held. I was blessed, though, with other children. It’s hard, so very, very hard.

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    1. Aye, Mimi. (hug) And I am blessed with two grown sons who know they have two mothers, but I am the one they turn to because I love them as my own. Because they are.

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