10 Sept: A Six Sentence Story

ai image created using midjourney: an ornate door with brass hinges and the number 9

The Shadowed Door

(the death of an online friend)

It’s like finding a shadow where a door used to be — a threshold crossed a thousand times without ever noticing the hinges.

Or like the neighbour you waved to across the wire and glass of years — now gone, and there are no casseroles, no tolling bells, just a single anonymous line in a comment box, marked with an emoji.

And yet the grief is real, curling its fingers around your heart, reminding you that bonds woven in words are still bonds — and absence stings the same, whether or not the chair ever stood at your table.

You search for the ritual that should follow — a candle, a hand, a funeral hymn — but silence yields nothing back.

When their light goes out, the street grows darker.

Still, you whisper their name — and the dark remembers.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “yield”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

21 responses to “10 Sept: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. May he walk on peaceful fields now.

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  2. I hadn’t thought about this much, but yes, it’s a shock and an real absence when the online greeting (post /comment) stops showing up, except as ghosts in our histories. I miss Tracy, David, Len, Elsie…🥀

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    1. Nor to mention an email folder heavy with decades of correspondence. I found myself reading through them all.

      Thanks for your comment, Liz.

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  3. Good point: “bonds woven in words are still bonds”

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    1. It certainly feels that way, Frank. Thanks for your response.

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  4. This is so beautiful…weep-worthy.

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    1. Thank you, Rene.

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      1. You’re most welcome.

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  5. So sad for those who have gone. Just remember the happy things – poems and short stories. A smile, now.

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    1. Yes. I smile for my old friend…

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  6. Excruciatingly beautiful!

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  7. how, back in the day, people would hold-forth (once, not accepting this world) on the difference between friends in the virtual world and the ‘real’ world… your Six adds to the answer I once offered to eliminate the distinction, a simple question, “…and remember the time that…”

    good Six

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    1. Thank you, Clark.

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  8. I am so sorry for your loss. I’ve had such, too, and it is a real and deep sadness and missing of someone you hoped to share many more words with.

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    1. Thank you, Mimi. He is one that I know has found his peace.

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  9. I lost someone very special a few years ago , I delve back now and again to revisit some of the comments she left, ones which spurred me on and made writing worthwhle. Miss you, GS.

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    1. We learn the rhythm of another person, an algorithm in a way, and it leaves a hollow in our own rhythm when it ceases. Leave one numb for a bit. Thanks for your thoughts, Keith, much appreciated.

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  10. So beautifully written, Misky. I’m very sorry for the loss of your friend.

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    1. Thank you, Denise. That’s very kind.

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