4 Sept: Journal of Thoughts

ai art, mother and baby sitting on a swing

Play it low — let the heat sing first, and let the porch remember.

August Porch

August —
the air sits thick as syrup,
a dry spell stitched with thunder,
heat tumbling from the sky,
pressing down like velvet.

On her shoulder, the baby
stirs and fusses,
a song spilling from her lips
like a half-remembered hymn,
gentle as rocking chair creak.

That slow smile —
Memphis-summer-slow,
rising like steam from red clay,
sweet as a lie,
true as hunger.

The radio hums molasses-time,
a lightning thread
itching the skin of the air,
but even the storm bows low
to this porch of quiet.

And when sleep comes —
brief, merciful —
the mother folds herself inward,
trusting the heat to hold them both,
for now, safe.


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8 responses to “4 Sept: Journal of Thoughts”

  1. It put me in mind of Allannah Miles’ ‘Black Velvet’. And ode to Elvis, but same calling up of hot, humid Southern nights.

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    1. And now I’ve just listened to your music video (smacks forehead).

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      1. (HA!) Snap, as my mother used to say.

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      2. There’s a rewritten version with near-rhyme also called “August Porch”.

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    2. You’ll find that the soundtrack is a cover of that song. This poem was inspired by it. I love that song, but I think this cover might be my favourite.

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  2. Equally lovely in both incarnations.

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    1. Lovely! I’m glad to know that.

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