2 Sept: dVerse Haibun

ai image of Hartley Colliery in Northumberland UK, people gathered around the mine waiting to hear with their loved ones died in mine collapse

The Holding Breath

To the 204 men and boys of the 1862 Hartley Colliery disaster — their breath drifts still, coal-dust caught in morning’s blacklung frost. They crawled into the narrow seams where lanterns barely held back the dark, where the air strangled itself thin.

We remember the steel-to-stone rhythm of their pickaxes, the hunger-click of labour, the slow beat of defiance: Enough. No more. This is the debt of dignity owed to every working hand.


Coal ash on the tongue —
nothing left but breath and weight
where the blast once sang.


Written dVerse Poets Labour Day prompt. This haibun is based on the Hartley Colliery disaster (1862, Northumberland) — 204 men and boys died when the mine’s only shaft was blocked by a fallen beam. It led to the law requiring at least two separate exits in every mine.

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8 responses to “2 Sept: dVerse Haibun”

  1. Powerfully told Misky (and reminded my of my father who was a coal miner in Nottinghamshire)

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    1. Aaah, so your origins are in my longitude! I’m delighted that it resonated well with you, Paul.

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  2. The workers are too soon forgotten. No one remembers those who die in mining caves or fall from buildings under construction or even those who have perished from sheer exhaustion.

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    1. This is very true, Stine. Thank you for your comment.

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  3. This is really the worst kind of work… I believe it still is bad actually.

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    1. I think only a handful are still open here, mostly in Wales.

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  4. Beautifully written! An event worthy of being recorded for future generations; good that you have done so.

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