14 Aug: A Slow Detonation

photo taken at Hammerhus on Bornholm B&W, iron bars, stone door frame, darkness inside cell as there are no windows.
In the Air Tonight by Sons of Legion 

A Slow Detonation

I. Imprisoned

Stone frames a freedom
that swallows every horizon whole.
Iron teeth bite shut the sky,
keeping light’s whispers out.
Here, the freedom is absence,
and absence is forever.

II. A Slow Detonation Poem

Power is the lie
that fits their fist,

that names the bruise
necessary.

That tells the wound —
this is right.

Their boots don’t care.
March.
March on.

But revolution
is under our nails,
in our molars’ grit,
in the way we still
peel the label
off a beer bottle —
like a slow detonation.

Stay furious.

The night is listening,
and already surrendering
to our insistent dawn.


Written for (II.) dVerse Poets “Power” prompt, and (I.) Ink in Thirds prompt “view” without using the word “view” ©Misky 2006-2025.

Description of the featured photo is included in the ALT field for the visually impaired — for those without visual assistance apps: A black-and-white photograph taken at Hammerhus, Bornholm, of a small stone dungeon door set deep within thick, rough-hewn walls. A heavy iron grate with vertical bars blocks the narrow opening, beyond which is only darkness. Crumbled stone and dust lie at the base, hinting at centuries of decay. Hammerhouse was built in the 9-11th centuries.

16 responses to “14 Aug: A Slow Detonation”

  1. There is definitely some raw power to be found here!

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    1. Thank you! So lovely when a reader feels the emotion of it.

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  2. Love the barely contained energy in these verses; may we detonate strategically because the world needs this cleansing blast. 🔥💛

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    1. Thank you, Liz. The world is very messy at the moment.

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      1. Sadly. yes. We’ll have a lot of cleanup and healing to do. Start now?

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  3. Wow…. staying furios is a great advise. There are ways to resist.

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    1. There are indeed, Björn.

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  4. This emits so much strength. Beautifully said.

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    1. Thank you, Violet, and thank you for the comment on the follow-up to this one. Much appreciated.

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  5. Misky, it looks like we’ve been imprisoning us mouthy ones for a long time. You put this together so well, the turning of the blame onto the victim. Totally agree with your last stanza. We will vaporize them with our glare.

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    1. Aye! Excellent prompt. Thank you.

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      1. Misky, thanks, and you are welcome.

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  6. I’m always amazed by your literary talent, chapeau!
    I particularly enjoyed “Imprisoned.”

    Yes, Stay Furious! My contribution today is intended in this spirit.
    Our generation learned that you have to take a stand, and back then, it was relatively easy to make your voice heard. Today’s younger generation has it much harder, partly because it took them too long to recognize political connections and was raised to “be good”.

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    1. Friedrich, my friend, you have given me reason to smile. Thank you. And furthermore, your comment inspired another post that I just released this afternoon — the approach of rebellion between different generations. It is not poetry or fiction or myth — something that my readers are not accustomed to seeing from me.

      And now, to read yours of today.

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    1. Thank you, Melissa.

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