5 Aug: A Six Sentence Story

Bornholm’s Troldeskoven and Elverhøj (Troll Forest and Elf Hill) 21 ft high and 450 tons granite.

Where the Air Remembers Your Name

The elves stitched the sunlight wrong that day—threads too gold, too tight — even the trolls’ granite knuckles itched, their slow blood humming something, something.

Elverhøj yawned open, just a slit: a shadow slid out, licking the air for old witch-scent.

She waited, blind eyes milky as the cave’s own breath, toes kneading moss.

Her hand lifted — not a ward, but a gesture of welcome, fingers pulling silence from the dusk like a splinter from flesh.

“Well, my lovely,” she lied, as the Elf King’s laughter unspooled from the rock, “I’ve brought a storm for you.”

And the trees held their branches just so, pretending not to eavesdrop.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “gesture”.   Imagery and prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

17 responses to “5 Aug: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. Ai! laurië lantar lassi súrinen,
    yéni únótimë ve rámar aldaron!
    Yéni ve lintë yuldar avánier
    mi oromardi lisse-miruvóreva
    Andúnë pella, Vardo tellumar
    nu luini yassen tintilar i eleni
    ómaryo airetári-lírinen.

    ( Namárië, Galadriel’s Lament to Lorien by J.R.R. Tolkien)

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    1. Your reply is a gift—thank you …. and she hears you through the long years numberless as the wings of trees!

      (quoting back)

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  2. SO much magic in only 6 sentences. We are Enchanted!

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    1. And I am enchanted by your lovely comment, Liz. Thank you!

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  3. Brilliant writing- and the opening music directly following the read felt like it furthered the tone perfectly!

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    1. Nice! Glad it came across like that. Thanks, Violet.

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  4. To my dearest readers: I am on a small island in the middle of the Baltic Sea until Sunday, where 3G is only occasionally available, and the WiFi in the cottage where I’m staying drops out frequently. If I don’t reciprocate your comment, or your valued comment here isn’t quickly given my quick attention — this is the reason, and I do apologise.

    M.

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  5. What a wonderful place… I am sure. The song is also very nice. Pan, perhaps?

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris! Might be, not sure. I just like the music.

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  6. Nice phrase: “pulling silence from the dusk”

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    1. Thank you, Frank!

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  7. I absolutely adore this – magical and the music is perfect 🙌❤️

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    1. Thank you. I’m delighted that you enjoyed it.

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      1. It was really lovely 💕

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  8. I agree, “really lovely”!!

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  9. Even the elves don’t always get it just right.

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    1. And what hope have we if even the elves mess it up!? 😂

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