30 July: A Six Sentence Story

Flood

Floodwater licks the porch — it tastes a memory. A child’s red balloon bobs along the wall’s wet breath … a fridge drifts past like a coffin; forks whisper from inside the drawers.

A woman wades through the hallway, her nightgown a pale blossom unfurling as she clutches a dripping photo album, its names and dates weeping ink, faces unlearning themselves. Her teeth chatter in cold protest meant for no one.

By sunrise, the church steeple bows, the river tightens around its throat — and the red balloon pops — not a sound, just a knowing.

Then a hush as the house exhales, and the walls fold like a patch of wet paper.


Written between Osnabrück and the Nord-Ostee Kanal, Germany, for Denise’s Six Sentence Story. This week’s word is Patch.  Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

18 responses to “30 July: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. Wow! Powerful words.

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  2. WIWIW*

    “…a dripping photo album, its names and dates weeping ink, faces unlearning themselves.”

    *Words I Wish I Wrote

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    1. Thank you, Clark. That made me smile.

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  3. Is there a lot more flooding going on these days- or am I just being made aware of them more. This was almost poetic in its treatment of what I am sure is a traumatic experience. Nicely done.

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    1. Thank you, Violet. ❤️

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  4. Nice description of that wet photo album: “faces unlearning themselves”

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  5. Wow! (Or, WIWIW) Some very poetic prose to describe a horrific situation.

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  6. We get water in the house sometimes, and have seen friends lose everything. This hits very close to home in a swamp where hurricanes sometimes sweep by, or flooding storms break suddenly.

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    1. It’s scary that’s for sure, Mimi. We live at the top of a long hill, but at the bottom is a small creek that breaks its banks whenever there’s a heavy isolated shower or a prolonged rain. It breaks it banks more and more often, year on year. Some of the houses can’t obtain flood insurance anymore. Thank you for reading my Sixes, Mimi. I appreciate it — even while I’m away on holiday … there you are. Thank you.

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  7. WOW WOW WOW…I’m otherwise without words, this is SO GOOD.

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    1. Thank you very much, D.

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      1. You’re most welcome!

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  8. Gosh, so… so… well… done.

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    1. Thank you, Chris. x

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  9. I forgot that I was reading prose, so poetic was it – and surely a piece like this will speak louder to those who deny what is happening than any amount of shouty protesting…

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    1. People won’t believe it until it directly affects them and even then … some will say it’s all just nature doing what nature always does.

      Take care, Andrew, I just read that there’s a big storm coming to the UK. I’m up in Denmark and then Sweden tomorrow, and after 9 days of sun — it’s pouring rain.

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