1 July: A Six Sentence Story

ai art. hen sitting on its nest in a rocking chair on a porch.

12 of 27: Frostwrit – Affection Behind a Locked Jaw

The Egg Song

“Easy, be gentle, my girl,” her grandmother says, eyebrows knitting into a single grey line, “and remember what I taught you this morning — focus, centre yourself — now be quick, or she’ll peck your eyes out.”

“Mothers will do that,” the girl mumbles, just low enough to be heard, and her grandmother snaps a bolting laugh from the top of her throat — “Hush now, and concentrate; a broody hen is no joke.”

The air in the henhouse is hot and sharp, thick with dust and baking wood and the scent of something that feels too close to violence, feathers shedding like snow in a storm of wings.

Felreil watches from the corner, half-shadow, half-patience, as the grandmother’s hands move with the silence of habit — slipping one brown egg from beneath the pullet as if secrets were meant to be gathered gently, her movements precise as a trim blade.

The girl flinches at the hen’s hiss, its wheezing egg song, and the wet smear of blood across the egg’s curve — but she does not drop it.

Later, she will remember this — not the fear, but the precision — and wonder if every woman she’s ever known learned softness the same way: behind locked jaws, with shaking hands, and no time for tears.

Goran Bregovic – Vivaldi (Black Cat – White Cat Soundtrack)

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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “trim”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

14 responses to “1 July: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. The magic of grandmothers/ grandfathers, we discover much later… blessed the ones who don’t have to wait for absence to type in bold the importance.

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    1. Aye. And what an incredibly beautiful comment this is, MN. Thank you.

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  2. I had a comment till I read Nick’s and now it’s gone. But I will admit to being too apprehensive to slip an egg out from under a brooding hen…

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    1. They can be quite stroppy, that’s for sure. 🤣

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  3. Nice descriptive phrase: “slipping one brown egg from beneath the pullet as if secrets were meant to be gathered gently”

    I remember gathering eggs by hand when I was a child. It is intimidating, at least for a child, but I did get those eggs.

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    1. Very intimidating. It’s something you never forget, and never forget how to do it.

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  4. There never seems to be time for tears, they fall inside instead.

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    1. Yes, inside — so nobody sees the cracks they leave.

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  5. Aww, just smiling… I used to have a few lovely hens and a little cockerel a few years ago. All passed away now, sadly.

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    1. Glad it brought you a cheery moment in your wintery weather.

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  6. this is so pretty! i love the artwork at the top of the page. and the writing? … as beautiful as i’ve come to expect. xx, ren

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    1. So lovely to read your comment. Thank you!

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  7. very nice moment in time/life/between generations

    told with grace and insight… but, that is what we’ve come to expect

    good Six, yo

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    1. Thank you so very much for the lovely compliment. (smiling)

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