25 June: dVerse Poetics

ai art: a black obsidian bowl mended with gold

Kintsugi for the Unfriend


We were porcelain once—
smooth to the touch,
holding the light
like a shared secret.

Then the fracture:
a word dropped,
a silence grown too heavy,
the map of us
redrawn in fault lines.

Now the gold comes—
not to mend,
but to make memories
of what broke.

Each lacquered seam
a testimony:
Here is where we held.
Here is where we learned
to let go without
shattering the whole.

The bowl won’t hold water now,
its hold is gone.
But oh, how it catches the sun—
turning every scar
into light’s lesson.

Some scars are gold,
there to remind you:
what broke you
also made you.


Written for dVerse Poetics. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

38 responses to “25 June: dVerse Poetics”

  1. luv the two sides of brokeness presented where the golden filling are noth memories and lessons learned

    much♡love

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  2. Perfect. I had thought of using this topic today for the W3 prompt, but I know I cannot say this any more eloquently than you have here.

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    1. Thank you, but please, go for it anyway —no single ‘voice’ will ever express it the same. I’d love to read yours (this one was from a prompt at dVerse).

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      1. I already wrote something else- but I was drafting on that last night when I was supposed to be asleep- so you never know it might smooth out one of these days.

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  3. I totally agree with Violet. You have created a perfect poem just as the reuniting of these pieces of broken clay have created a perfect piece of art.

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    1. I am so pleased to know that you enjoyed reading it. Thank you very much.

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  4. Synchronicity, eh?
    Brava, M

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    1. White Buffalo. Brilliant. A voice warm as summer. Thank you.

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  5. Beautifully written! Wise words!

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  6. Love it, Marilyn! The ‘then’ and ‘now’ so clearly portrayed, and the simile ‘holding the light like a shared secret’ is perfect, and these lines resonate:

    ‘Now the gold comes—
    not to mend,
    but to make memories
    of what broke’.

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    1. I am so very pleased that you found that resonating element. Thank you, Kim.

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      1. My pleasure, Marilyn!

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  7. ‘What broke you also made you’ – I have a love/hate relationship with that philosophy. But we’ll see.

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    1. Aaah, Petru. I only speak from my own heart—not for another’s. Thank you for reading this one. I appreciate it.

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  8. Beautiful reflections, Misky. I especially love the 3rd, 5th and 6th stanzas👌🏼

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    1. Lovely! Happy to hear that..

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  9. The conclusion made me sigh… so very beautiful

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    1. Thanks, Björn.

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  10. Lovely poem Misky, the lacquered seams of the repaired bowl, reveal both its utility and its flaws. It may not always “hold water,” but it often “catches the sun,” turning its imperfections into opportunities for learning and growth 🙌

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    1. Exactly so. Yes!

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  11. I love the 4th stanza especially Misky – you apply Kintsugi to the personal perfectly…

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    1. Thank you, Andrew. I hope all is well with you.

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  12. That last stanza is a powerful close. Thanks for sharing Misky.

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    1. My pleasure, Grace.

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  13. There are no two ways about, this is a delight, absolutely masterful.

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    1. Thank you. Such a lovely and generous comment is deeply appreciated.

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  14. Love the way you capture each step of the process with gentleness, grace and insight. This is so beautifully penned, Misky.

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    1. Oops, that was me.

      Mish.

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    2. Thank you so much, Mish. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

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  15. Beautifully written, Misk. Wonderful ending.

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    1. Aaaah. Thank you for that, S. I’m delighted.

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    1. Thanks! Big thanks!

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  16. “the map of usredrawn in fault lines.”I really like this idea. Nicely written. 👏

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    1. Thank you so very much. I’m pleased you enjoyed reading it.

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