17 June: A Six Sentence Story

ai art in the style of scrimshaw of a house and village with people

10 of 27 — The Truth Told Too Late

She remembers the lime-green hydrangea wallpaper, metallic flecks catching the light like something that failed to be beautiful, and the mirror above the sink—it’s too high for her body, but just right for her face.

Felreil sits on the bottom step, still as guilt, watching the air thicken before it hits.

He sees it land—the sentence pitched like a dish across a table: You are the stupidest girl on God’s good earth—and even now, decades later, the copper taste of it returns to her tongue uninvited.

She does not cry, not then, not after—she just washes her hands and counts the seconds between silence and obedience.

Felreil rises only when she looks at herself and does not ask Why?—because that’s where Quillbone lodges: in the questions swallowed before they form.

The girl will grow, will rise, will become, but she will carry the sound of that sentence like a coin tucked under her tongue, warm and unwanted.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “pitch”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

20 responses to “17 June: A Six Sentence Story”

  1. But the wise lady in the forest said…

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    1. … you are a whole universe, still unfolding. Be curious. Be you.

      Another perfect soundtrack. Thank you.

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    1. Thank you, Dorothy!

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  2. she just washes her hands and counts the seconds between silence and obedience. How many times I have sat in this little corner… Beautiful.

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    1. Thank you, Violet.

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  3. This is very good – and I can almost taste that coin from here! Wonderful wallpaper, too.

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    1. I’m very happy to know that you enjoyed reading this one, Chris. Sometimes I think this series is too big a challenge for my *boots* (so to speak). Thank you.

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      1. Don’t be daft – you are really good at this! 😁

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  4. Nice phrases: “still as guilt” and “the sentence pitched like a dish across a table”

    Good reminder of the power of our words on others.

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    1. Thank you, Frank, and yes, I agree that words carry a heavy weight.

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  5. Heartbreaking story, Misky. Gives one pause to wonder – how many carry that very coin? I echo Frank’s sentiment regarding the power of our words.

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    1. We all do to some extent. Thank you for reading this one, Denise.

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  6. The names can hurt us worse than the sticks and stones, no matter what the old saying wants us to believe.

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    1. Well said, and quite true,

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  7. Again, this one hit hard. Why can’t we just spit out the nauseous casual cruelty we were fed as kids? It’s not love. Not really.

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    1. It’s not love. That is a certainty, Liz.

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  8. My very fave part: “still as guilt”–wowza, how perfect!

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