2 June: A Six – The Book of 27

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Intro: Some echoes aren’t loud. They linger. This is one of them.

9 or 27 Echobane – (A vow that outlived you)

She opens the window, and the wind hops in like a memory—bold, uninvited, wearing his voice like a borrowed coat: I cherish you, it says, like it never once meant I’ll leave you.

Felreil stands in the hallway where the bathtub used to be, where water once knew how to cradle a body too tired to ask for saving.

She runs her hand along the wallpaper, hears it lift from plaster like a bandage from skin—grief whispering you’re not done in the same breath as move on.

She’s remarried, he’s kind, and the new ring catches light like a promise—it hums against the echo of the old one, like iron fusing iron in a forge neither man ever lit.

Felreil doesn’t judge—only listens to the shape of silence in a house that’s learned how to carry more than one ghost.

And when she laughs—quiet, cracked, almost free—he whispers, Some echoes outlive us not because they broke us, but because we never let them go far enough to die.


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “fuse”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

21 responses to “2 June: A Six – The Book of 27”

    1. It’s astral perfection. Thank you!

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  1. Nice description of those echoes that outlive us.

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    1. Thank you, Frank.

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  2. Very nicely written, Misky. Perfect summation with your last sentence, potent and on point. “… because we never let them go far enough to die.

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    1. Thank you, Denise!

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  3. loved it all, per usual. my favorite line was this one: “She runs her hand along the wallpaper, hears it lift from plaster like a bandage from skin” … 🙂

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    1. I’m glad you enjoyed it, Ren. ❤️

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    2. I agree*

      *thanks a lot

      (citing my own fave line) lol

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  4. What Ren said…

    best metagory*: that one phrase is to a tactile memory as the opening riff to Smoke on the Water is (to most guitar players and many music fans)

    *can never keep the two rhetorical devices straight… therefore brought in a middleman

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    1. That’s a big compliment, and I’ll say a big Thank You.

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  5. Echoes… memories… and whispers. Beautifully done.

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris.

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  6. Some things are too much a part of us to let go, even if they are just echoes.

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    1. Very true, Mimi. Thank you for leaving your thoughts here.

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  7. So difficult to dwell in that liminal space between love and heartbreak. How do we risk giving all of themselves (again) to new, maybe sweeter love?

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    1. ❤️ Love is the one tide that never truly ebbs—
      it just learns to wear different shells.

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