02.05: A Six – Brigid’s Journal

Brigid’s journal unfolds now beneath the Caledonian pines, where light moves differently, and the loch keeps its own counsel

1 May: Brigid and the Crow of Glen Affric

Glen Affric, Scotland – The sun turns its back on the hills as Brigid presses open a new page in her journal, and she writes:

do not paint the crow,
nor the pine’s rough bark,
nor the loch’s shattered mirror of sky.

paint in-betweens—
the silence where wing meets air,
the exact instant a thought becomes a shape,
the hollow where a human mind
presses against the crow’s knowing.

“Will my hand remember what my heart has never quite forgotten—” (she faces the canvas again, her hand hesitates, then the brush spills—not feathers, not fingers, but the trembling thread that connects how the crow sees angles, not as impressions or ideas, but as edges to use—and she turns each one into a question.)

the painting grows darker
than intended—
not a bridge, but a rift,
not an answer, but the ache
of asking.

“There—found it,” she whispers, in the wet gleam
of crow-black and pine-shadows:

a loneliness so precise
it could almost be wisdom,
a recognition that
she, too, is a creature
built for gaps.

Her aim—
not to fill the gaps,
but to fall in love
with the falling
into them.


watercolour, monochrome, black feather from a crow

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “impression”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

17 responses to “02.05: A Six – Brigid’s Journal”

  1. Note: This is an experiment in using 1st and 2nd person perspective within the same “voice”; text trimmed back to 6 sentences, including the word ‘impression’, and playing with some far-too-watery black watercolour and blotting to add perspective and texture. I also wanted retain Brigid’s ‘voice’ in my head should I return to her later.

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    1. Consider your experiment successful, M.
      The shift between 1st and 2nd is as cinematic & impactful as it can get.

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      1. Good. That’s good to know. Glad it works from a readers’ perspective also. Thanks.

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  2. ” not one gram of artistry in me bones…” … riiiiiiight.

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    1. Lovely song. (and shush – everyone’s allowed a bad day occasionally). 🤣

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  3. I came here via SSS and did not pay attention to where I was going. I was laid out by the fluidity of the piece, the knowingness with which it was written and the quality of the chosen words. Then I came to the comments, and there was your smiling face. Now do not interpret this as I was disappointed- but damn! I thought I had stumbled upon an unsung talent to add to my collection! hehehe

    This was an amazing piece.

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    1. 🤣 For the sake of my ego, let’s just say you stumbled upon an unsung talent. (laughing) I’m delighted that you enjoyed reading it, Violet. Thank you.

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  4. Good reminder: “she, too, is a creature”

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    1. Yes, we all are … Thank you for your comment, Frank.

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  5. yet another masterpiece!

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    1. So glad that you enjoyed Brigid’s Journal. She’ll probably make an appearance once a month (just so I don’t lose her internal voice).

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  6. Very clever… and wonderful.

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    1. Aaah, sweet words coming from you. Thank you!

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    1. Thank you, Mimi!

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  7. Lovely piece, Misky (gee, almost wrote “Brigid” and that surely is testament to her voice, clear as day)

    A bit behind on reading Sixes but wanted to read your 2nd from last week before reading this week’s!

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    1. Thank you, and also for taking the time to catch up on my Sixes. As for Brigid, she’ll be around from time to time—don’t want to lose her ‘voice’.

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