22.04: A Six – The Book of 27

2 of 27 Ashwine – a Colour once felt, not seen—the warmth you almost touched.
ai art: chapel with woman sitting in a pew looking at a man in a dark long cloak

2 of 27: Ashwine

Felreil steps through the broken arch of the chapel—not as a pilgrim, but as someone answering a question no one remembers asking—wooden shutters rattle as the wind forgets itself—and she sits in the front pew, maybe twenty years old, maybe timeless, her eyes closed—not in prayer, but in preservation.

Her hand rests on a stack of letters—read and reread—ink faded but still clinging to a name no longer said aloud.

Felreil does not speak, and neither does she, but when her breath catches—half sigh, half sob—he hears it: the sound of a song she once sang behind a door that never opened.

He kneels beside her, not touching, only near, and the warmth of his presence is the first thing she’s felt since the boy who never came back stopped haunting her shadow.

She opens her eyes, but not to see him—only to watch something leave: a memory not erased, but softened at the edges, the way grief ages into a kind of devotion.

When Felreil stands, the chapel smells of melted paraffin and memory, and as he steps back into the dusk, the wind moves through the shutters—trying not to laugh in church.


Want to go deeper with Ashwine? The long-form liturgy for this Colour is here: Read Ashwine – The Warmth You Almost Touched (the liturgy is a stream-of-consciousness poem. If you haven’t read the brief Prologue (or Before) post, it be useful in understanding this series.

Previous Instalments – To access all of the instalments on one page, please use this link

Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Rattle”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

19 responses to “22.04: A Six – The Book of 27”

    1. I always feel amazement in the tones that a string can produce—its song now part of the fabric of this tale.

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  1. Nice use of a melodic “m” sound in this iambic line: “the chapel smells of melted paraffin and memory”

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    1. Thank you, Frank!

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  2. But why not laugh in church? It is the one place where joyful laughter should be abundant.

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    1. My mother absolutely forbade it, said it was a sin. Also swinging one’s feet when sitting on a pew was too. 🥰

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  3. Brilliant is getting worn out, but I don’t know what else to say…

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    1. It is always nice to hear, Violet. Thank you.

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  4. “…wooden shutters rattle as the wind forgets itself

    wind moves through the shutters—trying not to laugh in church

    great lines and reminder to me of the power of a properly executed ‘show’ (not tell)

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    1. Thank you! I’m delighted you enjoyed reading it.

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  5. A mysterious, wandering character, your story reminds me of the folk lore of the sin-eater.
    Sentence 5 is such a beautifully crafted sentence, Misky.

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    1. Thank you so much, Denise. I just looked up the book the Sin Eater, and now it’s on my reading list. But not until I finish this 27 series so that it doesn’t bleed into my imagination. 😊

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  6. So full of mystery. And that’s part of the writing.

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  7. So full of mystery. And that’s part of the writing.

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    1. Thank you very much!

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  8. This is so perfectly written.

    …not as a pilgrim, but as someone answering a question no one remembers asking—

    and

    ...only to watch something leave: a memory not erased, but softened at the edges, the way grief ages into a kind of devotion.

    Genius!

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    1. Thank you! ❤️

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  9. Interesting… and I can almost smell the tall candles melting in a church.

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    1. Cool! Phantosmia!

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