14.04: A Six – The Book of 27

1 of 27: Veilwake
(Six sentences. One soul. A Colour once felt, not seen. A shard of the First Colour: Veilwake.)

1 of 27: Veilwake

Felreil walks where no wind speaks, and none dare follow, across a lunar-dry flatland that once dreamed of being sea but woke as salt-cracked stone—and when the black cloud drags its shadow across his path like a bruise across bone, he stops and listens (…not out of fear, but recognition), because sometimes thunder is only thunder, and sometimes it’s the Earth remembering how to shatter.

The hut is too small for the sky above it, tin roof blistered, rust crept down like dried blood from its seams, and inside, the man lies dying—not from one thing but from all things—as the woman reads from a book that names no gods and promises no salvation, only the comfort of a story shaped like a circle, smooth as stones that have survived a river.

He asks for water, the woman says nothing (she gave him the last of it days ago, just so he could dream of drinking again), and her voice is raw from reading aloud, but she keeps going—because if she stops, she’ll hear the silence, and if she hears the silence, she’ll remember the sound of him not breathing.

Felreil steps inside, and the air folds around him like it’s known him forever; the woman does not flinch—she only turns the page, as if he’s always been part of her story—she knew he was coming, the way you know a shadow is yours even when the light comes from nowhere.

He doesn’t offer water; he lays a hand on the old man’s chest and says, “Listen, old one,” and the man does—hears the breath between his own breaths stretch wide as sky, and in that space, forgets thirst.

The woman keeps reading, though the words have gone translucent now—older than paper, softer than sorrow, time’s own lease—and when the man exhales his last, it leaves him not as silence but as a syllable—the kind that moths carry on wings—and outside, the tin roof hums a note no one ever taught it to sing: a sound that stays behind, like a name the sky once knew—the sound of the first unnamed colour Veilwake .


If you haven’t read the Prologue (or Before) post, it’s useful in understanding this series.

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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Lease”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

18 responses to “14.04: A Six – The Book of 27”

    1. Perfect choice. Thank you.

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  1. When I read “The hut is too small for the sky above it”, I wondered: Aren’t all huts too small for the sky above it?

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    1. I guess it depends on where you’re standing — if you’re standing in London, surrounded by high-rise buildings, there’s very little sky to see. Or if you’re standing in a forest surrounded by trees there’s very little sky to see. But if you’re lucky enough to stand in the middle of a wheatfield, then the sky is broad and endless.

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  2. Damn, yo!

    As I am wont to do, I copy-scraped the first WIWT* phrase: “…flatland that once dreamed of being sea but woke as salt-cracked stone

    continued to read, then another, (barely a metaphor later) … scrape… then another ayiee!!

    will be back

    *Wish I’d Written That

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    1. Delight!! Scrape away, Clark.

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  3. That’s so interesting… and deep, very deep.

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  4. Delightful continuation. So full of delicious metaphor. Love it.

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    1. Thank you, Violet.

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    1. Yes, Mimi, life can be like that. Thank you for leaving a comment. ❤️

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    1. That is such a lovely compliment. Thank you!

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  5. Can’t help but be drawn in, undeniable source of all senses in wi ry hin this world you’ve conjured…Sorceress!

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    1. Nah, Liz, it’s just the magic of putting words together, but I’m delighted that you enjoyed reading it! Thanks.

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  6. What captivating writing, Misky. Blows me away sometimes. I can only imagine the next 26 installments. Looking forward to them.

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