01.04: The Old Woman Without a Cat

cartoon drawing of a cat in a garden of flowers with a speech bubble reading "The Old Woman Without a Cat"

The Old Woman Without a Cat

the old woman with no cat sits
on the garden step in perfect past tense,
next to daffodils that are going
papery dry and swollen with seeds.

she knows she should snap off their
little dead heads, leave them

headless as if she were a protagonist
in a nursery rhyme,

but instead she looks up at the hollow
blue sky, at one cloud trespassing,
and it’s

a cloud too white. too fat,
and sated. just one. racing ahead.
or maybe left behind, likely

steered adrift, or so thinks
the old woman with no cat.


This is an experiment in the style of The Dead Man poems by Marvin Bell. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

11 responses to “01.04: The Old Woman Without a Cat”

  1. Your poems are simply magnificent! Perhaps, alongside skill, wisdom and maturity are also co-authors.

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    1. You have brightened my day with that wonderful comment. Thank you.

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      1. You are more than welcome🙏🌷

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    1. I am such an avid fan and follower of Saltillo, particularly A Hair on the Head of John the Baptist. Thank you for reminding me of this brilliant song.

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  2. I do love this. And not just because I just might be an old lady without a cat.

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    1. I reckon even those women with a cat are—in their heart—an old woman without a cat. 🐈‍⬛

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  3. This poem has piqued my curiosity. I searched online for M. Bell. Quite a find…

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    1. He’s written a lot of fabulous poems.

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  4. This old man without a cat really liked your poem! Nice.

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