30 January: Jamaica Inn

woman standing at a tall window, looking at the Milky Way in the night sky.

At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part 7.1

The Nature of Being

Continued from Part 7

The Nature of Being

Where after the Inn,
Jamaica it was called,
the land gave up its trees to stone.

Its ancient breath lay bare
to brooding clouds at sight’s edge,

and a notch in the sky
revealed whole widths of folded time.

And my mind fell silent.

Bolventor, Launceston: I write this in my hotel room at the Jamaica Inn. Night has fallen close between stars with no hint of morning to be seen. I lift my glass of water and whisper, “Co-là-breith math dhut,” – and I notice that my glass has etched its ensō ring on the desk. ~B.


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The poem is a quadrille, constrained to 44-words sans title. The entire piece is six sentences. Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, including the word “close”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2025.

12 responses to “30 January: Jamaica Inn”

  1. Bravo! That’s quite impressive. Happy birthday to you too.

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    1. It’s not my birthday. It’s someone else’s that she knows. ❤️

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  2. so, who exactly is the naked matador?*

    * “a quadrille, restrained to 44-words sans title.

    lol (pointing at the entry: “Hypnopompic” in the ‘So you Want a Cool Word’? vol 2.4

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    1. My mind was elsewhere; course corrected … constrained. 😂

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  3. Happy birthday to whomever is celebrating.

    The enso ring makes me think that the person with the birthday is her departed husband.

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    1. the mystery … the mystery!

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    1. Stills my voice, pulls me deeper and drags me back again. Bòidheach. Thank you.

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  4. I hope the birthday celebrant knows s/he is being thought of.

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    1. I am quite sure they are, Mimi.

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  5. Excellent poem, my dear – and I know that place, Jamaica Inn, since I have read the book by Daphne du Maurier.

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    1. Thanks! I also read it (school days) and I had to stop off there when we drove home from Cornwall one year.

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