9 Jan: Journal of Thoughts

Four Days of a Hawk in Woburn Forest

On Monday,
a falcon took a pigeon
who was lost
in its own little snowstorm.

On Tuesday,
we discovered the falcon
was a hawk.

On Wednesday,
the hawk fell fast on a rat,
its eye and tooth and bone
quenched no appetite.

On Thursday,
the hawk swung a single arc,
and straddled a happy little rabbit
on the hill.

That same afternoon
the hawk fell a blackbird
whose flute played
just one last tune.

This morning,
we found a hawk in the ditch,
its flame quenched,
its light gone out.


Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

5 responses to “9 Jan: Journal of Thoughts”

    1. You’ve matched this basic lesson of nature for the little ones with a perfect soundtrack. Thank you.

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    1. They were completely fascinated to see a hawk so close up, wanted to poke it with sticks. 😂

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      1. Mind you, I don’t think I ever saw a hawk close up, except in captivity

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