9 Oct: A Six – What the Blind See

B&W image of an eyeball with a small person walking toward the eye
B&W image of an eyeball with a small person walking toward the eye

What the Blind See

She is swept by wind and blind as snow, and she sits on a bench that overlooks the sea on Beachy Head.

Hers is a salt-soaked throne facing the horizon and its sun-prism sky, and she stares, steady as a pointing stick, looking beyond what I see and shall not see, beyond the washed stars.

And like chinless men who stroke their beards, she keeps her eyes closed, tight as a banker’s fists, and why, I wonder, would a blind person close their eyes.

I watch her sitting calm as half-light at sunset, her hair a tangling mane in the wind, and if my manners were not an obstacle, and if I were not raised to keep myself to myself, I would’ve asked her if this type of wind-rushed scenery feels like a confined space … or does it feel like a dark womb, or does the sea sound like a snarling orchestra, or does it speak to her like a conversation between a muddled brown confusion of seagulls scooping out divots of sky.

And I pull my hat down over my ears as the weather turns moody as dark eyes, but that woman, she doesn’t seem to notice.

And the world remains blind.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “type”.  Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

19 responses to “9 Oct: A Six – What the Blind See”

    1. I hope everyone takes a moment to listen to your music selection. It’s quite perfect.

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      1. Nah… just a humble supplement to your profound ink.

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        1.  “…your profound ink

          Me being immature: ‘damn! I wish I’d of come up with that!’

          lol

          nice ‘un

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  1. Love your creative work.

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    1. Thank you very much!

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  2. “tight as a banker’s fists”…Oh!
    what a phrase!
    Linda xx

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    1. Thank you so very much. Glad you enjoyed reading this “Six Sentence Story”

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  3. Having been in a cave with the lights turned off I wonder what the beach would feel like to someone who is blind sitting there waiting for the sunrise.

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    1. That sentence confused me, so I imagine that person would also be confused. 😂

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      1. I could rephrase it this way. I’ve been in a cave where the tour guide turned off the lights. Darkness can get so dark, one’s sense of space vanishes. I wonder if someone who is totally blind might experience reality like that.

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        1. Ahh. Yes, and thank you for clarifying. I think this depends on whether the person was ever sighted or not. Whether they have a concept of depth perception or not. IMO a sighted person in a dark cave will feel confined whereas a blind person will not because perimeters are a concept rather than a given.

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  4. not paint-by-numbers, not Legos and surely not (but getting there) Aurora model car kit* your Sixes are so enjoyable to read (and re-)

    both as story and example (for those of us inclined to look (or try to see) how art is assembled, in the hopes of improving our own assembly-craft

    Good Six

    *well the airplane glue, like the nib of a pen, isn’t responsible for what gets written but does have a say in the tenor and tone

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    1. Your comments are always so generous that I find saying thank you, although completely genuine, insufficient. Nevertheless, thank you.

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  5. I wonder what her inner eyes are watching for, too.

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    1. Mindfulness. She might be seeing with her ears or sense of touch, tasting salty air … and there’s also proprioception, which is what Frank referred to.

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