2 October: A Six – Part: 32.1, The Nature of Things

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At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part 32.1

1964: The Nature of Things, Part 1

Cerberus

There’s a crow in the oak – it’s watching the line where the battle broke.

“I don’t know, Grandmother,” I’m in tears; the silent sort that claws, and she turns her back and walks away.

There’s a crow in the oak – a berating clatter, and I look up and shout, “Shut up!” and it calls back with a clash of shields and spear-like sounds …

          …and Grandmother stops, looks up at the crow, and then back at me, “Ah, Brigid,” she smiles, “I forgot your brain is unlike most.”

That crow followed me all summer.

I named it Cerberus … Cerberus, whose spittle is the deadly sap of Wolfsbane, the first plant I learned to identify.

Pierre and Hanzō watch me as I fall into silence; when an old memory escapes its restraint it leaves a deep hole, and Hanzō leans toward me, “The crow was Yatagarasu: the Crow-God; symbol of guidance during important journeys. … Hai, Brigid, you are unlike most.”


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Written for Denise’s Sunday’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Claw”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

18 responses to “2 October: A Six – Part: 32.1, The Nature of Things”

  1. Gods of the Old are visiting, often in mystic ways.
    Their laughter resounding, often like shields bashing & spears piercing.
    For this is man’s bane; free will turned into steel claws.
    Claw vs claw, fighting towards a mountain top.
    A top named Sisyphus Resting.
    Cerberus, son of The Wolf… proper naming.

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    1. Brilliant. Let me reply in kind …

      The old gods wear their stardust and gather at dusk. 
      Talk of their tales, of bloodlines thicker than rust. 
      Speak tongues of words told in embers of rage. 

      Black crow is released on its wings from its cage.
      Yet man still climbs, blind to the weight in his hands. 
      A stone etched with echoes, names carved like shifting sands.

      Thank you for your Six, and a perfect soundtrack choice.

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  2. Hiya Misk, Hope you had a good time in France. I got back from mine yesterday.

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    1. Hi there. It was brilliant. Nine days of lovely weather and exceptional food. Nothing like Brittany and Normandy for seafood. I hope you two had a lovely time also.

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      1. It rained a fair but but we were in a city so it didn’t matter much. I walked at least 10,000 steps per day which, these days, is beyond my capacity. I’m paying for it now!

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        1. We had dry and cool weather in Loire Valley, but rainy in St Malo on the last day. We took the Dieppe to Newhaven ferry back home. Such an easy and pleasant journey, compared to driving to Calais and then an hour + home. All good with your daughter?

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          1. I went to St Malo in the summer and will go back next year without hesitation. But the weather must be good. This time, we crossed Pmth – Le Havre and trained to Rouen. But really, the best thing about Le Havre is getting out of there!
            Daughter good. Different generation… she bought all the train tickets on her app while I was still trying to fathom out what the ticket machine said! And met up with someone, never met before, again via an app, and they ended up out til 3 each night, partying! So much so that this girl might come visit her here, if she can get the visa.

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            1. P buys my train Thameslink tickets using an app; I find the machines, which are in English, confusing when trying to find an off-peak cheap ticket. And I’m not computer illiterate either!

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              1. I don’t like that these apps expect you to specify the exact time train you want to get, but I suppose if you use them close enough to departure time, it’s okay. The last train left in 10 minutes, was why I was stressed when we arrived. But again, she has a car-pool app and had almost arranged a lift for us had we missed the train. bDifferent woeld!

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  3. Nice phrase: “when an old memory escapes its restraint it leaves a deep hole”

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  4. Oh yes, a wonderful crow indeed.

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  5. This is rich stuff, where gods meet gods on a human plane…

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    1. Thank you, Liz!

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  6. really enjoyed this entry.

    but…but! that first line! ayiee

    There’s a crow in the oak – it’s watching the line where the battle broke.”

    the cadence created, talk about hooking the Reader on the opening (of a story)! And the rest of the story one of rhythm and information building until the end

    good Six, yo

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  7. Brilliant birds, crows. They know things.

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    1. A very clever bird. Thank you for leaving a comment, Mimi.

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  8. A rare glimpse into Brigid as a young girl – a little more charcoal thrown on the canvas.
    I really enjoyed the structure/presentation of your Six, Misky.

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    1. Thank you, Denise. A change of gears on this one. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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