21 August: Part: 23 A Mad Horse Amongst Swords

a.i. artwork: hanzō samurai in a hospital room with a young man, sage-green walls, tall window
a.i. artwork: hanzō samurai in a hospital room with a young man, sage-green walls, tall window

At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part 23 A Made Horse Amongst Swords

Last Week … but Pierre knows, we are like mycorrhizae; we are all connected.


Dr Crowthorne is a silhouette in the open doorway of room B4, sunlight flooding in from the windows behind him, and without moving his eyes away from Pierre, Hanzō thanks the doctor and invites him to lock the door behind him when he leaves.

I’m writing Connor’s curse on white onion skin … letter by letter … in reverse order,

while Hanzō tells Pierre to envision ‘home’, where he grew up … with its seawall-calm harbour, Nordic winter-frozen roads from the headland down to the beach that sips cups of seawater, and Pierre exhales,

“Yes, yes, exactly!” … Hanzō’s face stiffens and he says, “No, Pierre.”

Hanzō speaks so softly that Pierre must lean in close to hear that ‘home’ was the compressed humidity of Marseille, a boy working on trawlers with dripping nets of fish … and that his mind succumbs to suggestion too easily, and that Connor’s curse is a fabricated reality of unswerving malicious intent.

“… the fire was an accident, Pierre, caused by an overload – an excessive electrical load on the circuit,” I read the investigator’s report, Hanzö says.

And he continues, “Be true to your own vision, not that of a jealous ghost … be a river, Pierre, be swift and deep, become the sea, … not a horse mad amongst swords.”

I light the candle … hold the onion skin inked with continuous lines of letters to its flame – it sparks and hisses and rolls in on itself as Connor’s curse rises, a smudged black cloud that dissipates into the sunlight – and as if the sun always shines on lost souls, Pierre’s spirit spills out of this long dream, his eyes clear and full again, and he smiles at Hanzō who is bowing deeply before him … and Pierre asks, “Who are you?”


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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, include the word “dream”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

14 responses to “21 August: Part: 23 A Mad Horse Amongst Swords”

  1. Sounds like good advice: “Be true to your own vision, not that of a jealous ghost”

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    1. Words to live by in this case.

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  2. Never saw it coming….plot twist! Well done, Misky 😎

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    1. Thank you, Denise.

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  3. nice (but subtle) surprise ending (in the sense of a narrative corner, we trust)

    (personal favorite phrase in the category of ‘gentle pluck of a dusty spring’: “…trawlers with dripping nets of fish.” totally took me back.*

    *like any good flashback, the combination of pleasant and fuckin’ annoying** emotional response is the sign of an effective phrase

    **at this time of year, in early morning, getting ready to set out (the net) the frickin’ drops would always find the exposed back of one’s neck lol

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    1. I’m delighted that you like this one, Clark. One summer as a teenager, I worked on a trawler, and I swear it wasn’t until Christmas that the smell of fish left my sinuses.

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  4. What can be done, can often be undone, if you have the key.

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    1. Never a truer word’s been said!

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  5. This is so interesting… I particularly liked the way the white onion skin fizzled out.

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  6. All this and Nina Simone! Nice twist at the end.

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    1. Thank you so very much!

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  7. A wonderful text and a great image! BTW your whole blog looks very elegant!

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    1. Thank you so very much, Friedrich.

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