10 July: A Haibun for Sarah

reddish pink roses from my garden

For Sarah

It was yesterday. I was in the garden looking at the roses, three-deep at the curve of the border, pink blossoms big as dinner plates, and the wind flowing in and out and whirling about, the clouds scraping blue off the sky, and I watched the roses fall into bruised quiethood, dropping their spoon-ish petals of yellow and pink and white and scarlet. It was yesterday when I was struck by a word that pulled taut my heart, a word that swung from heaven like a bell, its motion slicing off the petals of my roses, and there was a part of me that was beyond silence, when she said, “palliative”. It is a stone dropped in a pond, tucked into silence, its ripple setting off to find space, and I wish my friend Sarah a very easy journey.

Write stones into bread
Sounds of a bell in a bell
The shadows she leaves


“Her & the Sea” by Clann

Including a deconstructed line from Sarah’s poem “Find me a space here, tucked into the silence.”  from ‘No mail – no post’. For Sarah Connor and dVerse Poets 

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19 responses to “10 July: A Haibun for Sarah”

  1. Patricia McGoldrick avatar
    Patricia McGoldrick

    Words so moving on this rainy morn. Felt the ripples for your friend across the pond.

    Roses, so perfect in beauty, always with thorns.

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    1. Thank you so much, Patricia.

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  2. You don’t seem to be linked up to Mister Linky, Marilyn, I had to click on the url to get to your poem, which means that other poets might not read it, and that would be a shame. I love your haibun, full of colourful flowers, and I know that Sarah would love it too. I especially love the ‘clouds scraping blue off the sky’ and the roses falling into bruised quiethood’. The word as ‘a stone dropped in a pond, tucked into silence, its ripple setting off to find space’ made me gasp.

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    1. I had treatment on my eyes yesterday at Moorfields, so I’m not in a position to reciprocate commenting with other poets. It seems unfair of me to link up, but for Sarah’s sake, I will. I’ll try the best I can to read and comment on others.

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      1. Marilyn, I hope you recover quickly from your eye treatment; I remember what it was like when I had my cataracts removed. I can link up your poem myself, if you like. Please don’t feel obliged to comment. I’m doing plenty of that myself!

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        1. I’ve linked it , Kim, and I’ll try to comment but 31 poems to read is probably beyond what the doctors want from me. ❤️

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  3. This is beautiful and so very heartfelt. I too was taken back by the word palliative. It has such a finality to it when spoken out loud. Very well done.

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    1. Thank you so much.

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      1. You are very welcome!

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  4. Beautiful haibun Misky. That word indeed is a stone dropped in the pond, rippling off to find space. Thanks for sharing.

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  5. I hope your eyes recover to match your poetic vision, Marilyn – this was very moving…

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    1. Thank you, Andrew.

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  6. What a beautiful haibun, and a wonderful tribute to Sarah!

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  7. Beautifully composed and so very touching.

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    1. Thank you, Mish

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  8. Ah, Misky, thank you. This is so beautiful. Each image is perfect. I’m going to hold this in my heart.

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