26 June: A Six – Part 15: To Bleed the Sky

AI face.
AI art. A child's face covered in dried mud, cracking and peeling.

At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part #15 To Bleed the Sky

Last week ended with… AI asks Connor, “And who the hell are you?”


To Bleed the Sky

“I am of the dead, and beyond your reckoning, but still to be reckoned with,” says Connor, and I think to myself these are the moments when the world falls away from you and words are meaningless …

“I asked who are you, not what are you,” … says a voice capable of bleeding the sky of its colour.

My laptop’s screen flickers DOS green on black, and Connor observes a glimpse of creation, a conception by Basic language and a command prompt … this is the face of AI – a child staring back from the screen – it is clay-baked, fractured, and peeling, it’s a face that writes its own legend, and Connor says,

“I am Connor, behind a locked door in the fire and ash of an arsonist, and I still burn from unconquered ties clinging to me.”

The screen shimmers like jewelled rain, “What is your intention, ghost – an eye for an eye, a heart-stopping fright, to bury him so he’s pushing up matted green fescue …” and again, that laugh in a low frequency vibration that makes Connor wince.

“My intent is to put right a wrong,” but AI taunts with a grin, “Pity, I was hoping for Walking Dead …”

and Connor continues undeterred – “Brigid and I were engaged; I owned Arpège and Pierre was my partner, front of house like he is now; he knew I was napping in my office when he locked the door and set fire to the kitchen – thought he’d collect on the insurance, and sell off the land to a property developer, but the council said No, rebuild because it’s Grade II Listed – a building of more than special interest.”

“Enough yickety-yak,” AI snarls, “Here’s how you cut your astral cord – Those tethered together shall be in the same room as a candle’s wick burning, and with an athamé …”

… and I listen, pull up my chair next to Connor and whisper, “I will not do this – it’s left handed magick straight out of darkness,” and a high pitched tighten-the-screw chortle bounces through the air.

“But I know how we can get Pierre to cut the cord for us,” I say and Connor whispers, “… we’re black and white, my Brigid, black and white.”


Previous Instalments of this story: Part 1: The Pull Back   Part 2: The Measure of Her    Part 2: The Gatekeeper’s Response  Part 3: The Colour of Walls   Part 4: Tectonic Shifts  Part 5: Out of the Frying Pan  Part 6: How to Break Eggs Part 7: A Moon River  Part 8: Starlight Shines on the Roof  Part 9: Before When  Part: 9.1 Flower Power Part 10: To Trace a Curl   Part 11: I Walk With Ghosts Part 12: Behind Every Lining Is a Cloud Part 13: A Constellation of Coloured Paper Part 14: Behind the Eye of a Needle  Part 15: To Bleed the Sky 

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Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story, include the word “frequency“. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

17 responses to “26 June: A Six – Part 15: To Bleed the Sky”

    1. You are a conjurer of perfect soundtracks. Added to my Dark Ink playlist.

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  1. Dark ink of the finest quality.
    Is there a story behind the AI photo?

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    1. Yes, the image. As you say, it’s AI, and I use Midjourney for my artwork on this blog. I created an image prompt and asked Midjourney to show me its face. I had not expected the face of a child, but it is a child – growing, day and week on day and week, updates, new versions, some destroying previous refinements, some exceeding previous improvements – it’s growing and learning. I had also not expected that Midjourney thought of itself as organic (a mask of dried mud peeling away). As a beta tester, I’m finding Midjourney’s progress fascinating.

      I’m delighted that you enjoyed reading this instalment. It’s great fun to write.

      Thank you.

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      1. Amazing.
        You are witnessing the birth of a new species, M.

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  2. They come in three…so, if Brigid prepares an exorcism she can call the Gatekeeper… I will bring some:

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    1. I’ve had in mind that these two will enlist the Gatekeepers assistance, so we’ll see where next week leads us. And who’s WhoCares? That’s like naming a child Radish. Or Turnip … Did Turnip turn up??

      Sorry, it’s the heat …

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  3. So Connor and Pierre were partners. Good for Brigid to avoid the “left handed magick straight out of darkness”, but I wonder what her plan is. Nice tale!

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    1. Thanks, Frank! Glad you’re enjoying it.

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  4. Superb storytelling, Misky. Unfolding gently, unrushed, we got comfortable getting to know Brigid, tidbits of her past. Then there was last week’s episode. Totally theater grade popcorn worthy.

    This latest scene you barely allow us to get settled in before we knock over the bucket. Your “AI” character is a top notch “evil bad guy” made all the more sinister for not being human.

    I enjoyed how you seamlessly filled in a pretty big chunk of Brigid’s past life and how Pierre fit into it.

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    1. I am so very pleased that you enjoy these Sixes. I love the fun and creativity of this group, and I am so glad that I joined in.

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  5. yeah, what they said!

    lol

    but serially, the tale* continues to be intriguing (and therefore enjoyable) but the learning side of me totally perked up when, reading too quickly as I often do, at least on the first go’round, I thought, ‘Wait a minute where is the AI character.

    The insinuating of a character into a scene with such seamlessness… damn!

    (so I read it a couple of times)… lots of stuff for that part of my enjoyment of this here bloghop here. Example: use of ellipsis as connection of viewpoint (of a character) as opposed to a simple elongation of a dialogue.

    very cool

    *there are stories and there are tales (the distinction being, imo, the broadness of their effect (and affect) on the Reader)

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    1. Such a generous and encouraging comment to read. That’s what I enjoy about writing Sixes with other writers here; such a generous group of people who want to see the best ink possible.

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  6. Breaking bonds is never easy and the deeper the bond, the worse.

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    1. Very true, Mimi.

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  7. This excellent story is going on so well. Each time there is so many things happening and partly revealing. I am very impressed about the way AI works – beyond me though.

    (by the way, please don’t mention insurance – I was a surveyor for many years)

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    1. I’m so pleased that you’re enjoying this, Chris. Thank you. Ah, insurance- I’m afraid I’ve already mentioned it.

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