19 April: NaPoWriMo

A representation of age-related macular degeneration of sight.

A Blot Upon It All

She calls me her blot.
Her watermark.

As if
she’d looked directly into the sun,
or a flashbulb had gone off
in too close a proximity.

Like January eyes – bokeh’d,
fogged, a wet ache,
foot-loose, if those eyes were feet.

Forlorn perhaps, but not always,
just as night can’t blot out the day,

or to see a field of rapeseed
un-tethered from yellow.

What a sight.
I am an ink blot in the wind,
her measure of dusk before darkness.

She says I’m a question
that falls away into a shadow.
These eyes are a dark sound.

A slow cull.
A camera’s flash residue.


Written for Miz Quickly’s Day 19: A poem in the first person voice from the view point of an abstraction (Sight with Macular Degeneration). Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

11 responses to “19 April: NaPoWriMo”

  1. What a good choice. Sends my mind skittering off into interesting places. Liking the watermark, and esp the dark sound stanza.

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    1. Thanks, b. I started off with trees and it just didn’t hang together. This just wrote itself, which was handy because vision is a twisted-sister today. 😂

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  2. This is phenomenally good!!

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    1. Thank you, Vee. I’m glad you enjoyed reading it.

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      1. My great pleasure.

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  3. Oy. Marvelous; especially the windy inkblot. Danke

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    1. Thank you so much, Ron. Glad you liked it.

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    1. I think I’ve developed a hunger for string instruments. This is a lovely soundtrack for this poem. Thank you, N.

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  4. Love this one!

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