10 April: A Six – Part 4 Tectonic Shifts

AI Art: a clear glass vase filled with pink peonies in a room with deep green walls and sash windows

Previous instalments of this story: Part 1: The Pull Back   Part 2: The Measure of Her    Part 2: The Gatekeeper’s Response  Part 3: The Colour of Walls   Part 4: Tectonic Shifts  Part 5: Out of the Frying Pan  Part 6: How to Break Eggs Part 7: A Moon River  Part 8: Starlight Shines on the Roof  Part 9: Before When   Part: 9.1 Flower Power


At an Intersection Named After an English King and a Saint
Six Sentence Story: Part 4 Tectonic Shifts

This man and a dog – they knock constantly on my periphery, and I look at my watch and rise from my chair, “Bonne nuit mon amour, and thank you for this lovely evening, Pierre,” and he says, “Dessert and coffee upstairs at yours, Brigid,” and I smile, “Thank you, but no, I am as full as a starry sky with food and drink,” and I pull the Six Sentence Café & Bistro card from Pierre’s white-knuckled-vice-like grip, slip it into my pocket, and step outside into the earthy light of a wood-colour moon.

I wake the next morning with two things in mind: Two 5-litre tins of Farrow & Ball dead flat ultra matt paint Green Smoke #47 that arrive later this afternoon, and secondly, if home means sash windows, and streets paved with people wrapped in bright colours and bright ideas … and where rain shines and fog unrolls from the core of breath itself … then I am home.

Idle thoughts aside, I have the morning to kill, to walk the street named after a saint with my heart in my bones to Mr Wowak’s grocery, he sells meats, fruit, chewing gum, tinned food and fish, and for small talk with him (he says there’s something wrong with him, but what he doesn’t know) — and I look at the address on Nick’s card, and inexplicably fancy myself as a flower that’s a weed that’s a flower (as my grandmother used to call me), and I’m off gliding like a waltz along the pavement, light footed as two legs in a full gallop.

I suppose it’s the thought of weeds being flowers that draws me into FlowerBx; I buy nine double pink peonies – they’re as precocious and full of promise as I thought I might be some day, but they’re equally fragile with drooping heads heavy as weather.

I step out of FlowerBx into a group of foraging sparrows – they take flight in front of me, and it’s at this moment, under the dusty rush and weight of their wings that my thoughts of a man and a dog are severed … I’m tuned into birds chattering rumours in the wind, and I am completely distracted and captivated …

and I walk straight into a bearded man walking with a large muscular black dog whose gyrating tail could do a serious amount of damage in a china shop.

“Fuck me,” says the man with a beard, who scrambles for balance and lands hard, the black dog’s tail is still spinning pirouettes, and I apologise profusely and probably more than what’s necessary, and I say, “Please let me help you up,” and he holds up his hand in that universally understood gesture of Stop and says, “Thank you, I can manage, thank you,” and he gathers himself together, returns the bouquet of peonies to me, and as he starts walking away, I say, “Your dog is lovely,” and he replies in a voice that reminds me of shifting tectonic plates, “He’s not my dog.”


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Story including the word “Core”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

20 responses to “10 April: A Six – Part 4 Tectonic Shifts”

  1. smiling
    Perfect,, M! …just perfect… strangers!

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    1. Complete perfection for this scene. Thank you, N.

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  2. In the early days after my stroke, I was in various online support groups. I “met” another survivor, she had 3 dogs who regularly pulled *her* over when she walked them.

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    1. It’s so dangerous when a dog does that. One of the problems here are dogs off lead that attack smaller dogs. A Staffordshire terrier attacked my Molly and nearly killed her.

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  3. Nice descriptions throughout especially “a flower that’s a weed that’s a flower”. It sounds like she ran into the man who walks dogs that are not his own from the previous story.

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    1. Nope, they’ve not met but the man and the dog know Pierre-the-chef. You’ve now made me think I should have links to previous posts for this series. Thanks for reading part 4, and leaving your comment, Frank.

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  4. (one might credibly argue that no one owns a dog. responsible for, guardian to, companion of, or if very, very fortunate, co-family member but not owner as in chattel)

    surely, given their nature, to say one owns a dog would be comparable to a child naming a star and insisting it exist only for them.

    ed. word on the street is that, as we approach the end of the ‘of Heroes and the MisUnderstood’ the action will be headed towards a certain Café & Bistro… don’t lose that card.

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    1. When I was about the age when you’re expected to understand the sense behind fractions of fruit … I told my grandmother, who quite rightly thought fruit should be eaten and not played with, that I claimed the moon as my own. She just nodded her head and never contested my claim, and to my knowledge nobody else has either, so I still claim the moon as my own. I do however, being generous to a fault, share it with a small, close circle of friends.

      That card is tucked safely in my pocket – I just have to remember to remove it on laundry day.

      Thanks for leaving your delightful comment, Clark.

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  5. How you can make one laugh!

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    1. How delighted I am to hear that. Good morning to you, Petru.

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    1. Many thanks, Mimi.

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  6. Oh goodness, I could see this scene so clearly–well done!

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    1. Thank you so much. Such a lovely comment to read first thing in the morning.

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      1. Oh, I’m happy to hear that!

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