6 April: NaPoWriMo

AI art: man, weathered skin, beard, intense eyes

The Man Who Made Besoms

I know a man, although I don’t think you ever know a man like him, who lived in a boathouse on the lake. He was stick-willow thin, hair wild and the colour of fire, he loved walking in razor-blade-like-rain. Had a beard the colour of grey mould. He spent his days fastening and unfastening twigs and willow bark. Always ate bologna sandwiches for lunch, that and a black coffee. He had one skill – he made cinnamon and birch besoms. I took him for lunch one day, just to prove to him that other sandwich fillings were equally tasty. He ordered a black coffee and bologna sandwich. We ate in quiet contemplation. nothing could break our silence – his eyes unfocused and staring, blind as his besoms.

Coal black was his sight
Skies might as well have three moons
It’s an unbroken sleep


Note: a besom is a handmade broom. A haibun written for Miz Quickly’s Day 6 “cha-ching shopping/buying something”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

10 responses to “6 April: NaPoWriMo”

  1. A beautiful Irish voice whose departure could break one’s heart. ❤️

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  2. Wow! Quite a haibun there. Well done! I liked the photo you paired it with, too. ~Nan

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    1. Thank you so much, Nan!

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    1. such an interesting mix of sounds. Not quite heavy metal but almost. Not quite blues but nearly. I had to listen on Spotify as the YouTube sound wasn’t clear enough to hear the lyrics. Thank you so much !

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      1. Not unlike your character of this ink..
        Not quite but…

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  3. I always admire the way you weave the art and poetry together. You’ve done a fine character study here. I think I know enough about him to not have to meet him in person – or buy his besoms!

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    1. Thank you, B. He’s real. I’ve changed the location, and the sandwich, but he was an interesting guy.

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  4. Haibunilicious, M! Thanks

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  5. Wonderful catch of an eerily interesting man. I’d buy one of his besoms though.

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