21 February: 6SS Passing

AI artwork: thunder storms, fire, lightning, ruins of ancient pillars.
AI MJ

What happens When You Fall Asleep to Music

My head is filled
with the long stretched strings
of a hundred violins.

And one cello whose cry hangs
like a suspended thunder storm.

This percussion
will beat down the Gates of Troy.

Clashing, those triple brass cymbals.
Those spears of flames, fierce as joy.

Out of Homer, these sounds
pass through me like dawn’s burning.


Written for Denise’s Six Sentence Stories This week’s word is “pass”. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Images are copyright and not to used without permission, which I willingly give when asked, and when not for commercial use. Imagery and poems/prose ©Misky 2006-2024.

12 responses to “21 February: 6SS Passing”

    1. Chills. Right down my spine. Thank you.

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  1. Wow

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    1. I’m delighted.

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  2. What a stunning image. And to fall asleep to music can be dangerous … like dawn’s burning. Love your imagery in both prose and art.
    https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2024/02/nocturne-for-poetry.html

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    1. Thank you so much, Roland. I’ll pop over to yours in a minute.

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  3. I usually select softer music for bedtime. I hope the percussion and clashing doesn’t give one a headache, but good advice to have something playing while one sleeps.

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    1. No headaches, thankfully, Frank. I often fall asleep to music.

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  4. Dreams can be influenced by so many things.

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    1. That is so true! I remember my mother saying never eat cheese before bed because it’ll give you bad dreams. It doesn’t, but that didn’t stop her from thinking it would.

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  5. This is wonderful and wow!
    (It’s midday for me just now, by the way)

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    1. Thank you so much, Chris. I’m delighted that you enjoyed reading it.

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