5 December: dVerse Prosery

I Was Where I Am

I was standing at the kitchen sink, the cold tap turned on just enough to slide the egg and bacon fat off the plates. Standing there, staring down the street toward the old oak tree that nearly burnt when the pub had that kitchen fire a few years ago. Thinking of things that I’d lost. People that I’d lost. It was the anniversary of my father-in-law’s death yesterday. He once told me that he loved me as if his own. I remember standing there with tears rolling down my face. Tomorrow is the anniversary of my father’s death. Different years, I hasten to add, but just one day apart. And I was standing at the kitchen sink, the cold tap turned on ever so slightly – mentally adrift, thinking inwardly, and knowing that I was where I am when the snow began to fall.


Written for dVerse Prosery: 144 words sans title, including the prompt phrase “I was where I am when the snow began to fall” from “The Dead of Winter” by Samuel Menashe. Full poem is here. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

28 responses to “5 December: dVerse Prosery”

  1. Feeling this deeply, sis. ❤︎

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    1. It was mostly the line from that poem – it just tied in with me. Thanks for the comment, sis.

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  2. Oh, Marilyn, this is touching and so real. How many times have I stood at the kitchen sink?

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    1. Those darned sinks, eh? Thanks for leaving me your comment, Kim.

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  3. So very moving and evocative. Standing there by the sink, reflecting on these deaths and life . . .
    It’s so personal and also universal. Thank you!

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    1. Thank you so much for the perfect line from that poem.

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      1. You’re very welcome!

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  4. {Applause} An excellent internal discussion!

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    1. Thanks, glad you like reading it.

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  5. Very moving piece

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    1. Thank you so much, Sadje.

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      1. You’re always welcome 🙏🏼

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    1. Thanks, Dorothy. ♥️

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  6. Standing at the kitchen sink, or anywhere for that matter, you have captured the real emotions of remembering, I feel how lost in thought you are. A wonderful piece of prose.

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    1. Thank you for your very kind words, Helen.

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  7. The sense of melencholy is so vivid in this story… really moving.

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    1. Thanks, Björn. The prompt line was the trigger.

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    1. Absolute perfection for the occasion. I’m taking this with me tomorrow. Thank you, N.

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  8. Washing up and ironing, have the same effect. Very evocative.

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    1. Ironing makes my eye twitch. I stopped as a result. I called it retirement. 😂

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  9. The kitchen sink is often the place where memories are brought back. Maybe it’s the mindlessness of washing the dishes that permits our minds to wander back. An enjoyable and relateable story.

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    1. Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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  10. It’s difficult not to get lost in those thoughts sometimes. To lose two fathers so close to the date of the other has got to compound the pain.

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  11. an anniversary and grief, a potent testimony to time and relationship and loss. I especially like how you capture how time is not linear, but it is instead strongly tied to experiences and feeling.

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    1. Thank you for noticing those nuances.

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      1. My pleasure Misky

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