5 November: Still

AI: sailboat on a calm sea, blue sky.
AI MJ

Still

He’s fallen asleep in his chair.
The sun’s served its purpose today,
it’s nearly set, and his stillness is
in me. It’s not translatable.

He breathes, nearly unmoving.
He’s water within water.
His heartbeat sounds like
tiny footsteps. Running.

This man of mine is a paradox
of cyclones and soft breath.
Movement and salty stillness.
And he burns hotter than the sun.

He gave me his name,
and I gave him my heart.


Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

27 responses to “5 November: Still”

  1. I hope you left him to snooze!

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    1. Of course. 🥰

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  2. He’s water within water.

    I wish I had written this line.

    ~David

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    1. Such a nice compliment, David. Thank you.

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  3. 💚 Really nice, Misky.

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    1. Thank you, Tom. Good morning.

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      1. 🙂 Good morning!

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  4. ☀️ A’ ghrian

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    1. I miss him. Such a lovely voice.

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  5. Oooh! I can fall into this poem.

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  6. You certainly can fall into the calm love of this verse. Beautifully sculpted lines. This was a fine way for me to start the day.
    https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/11/noirvember-farewell-to-love.html

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    1. Thank you, Roland. I’m delighted that you enjoyed reading it.

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  7. Misky, luv it down to the last two lines!

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    1. Thank you! May I ask, who are you? 🤣

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  8. This is just wonderful. Thank you Misky!

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    1. Thank you very much!

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