4 November: Twenty-Two Seconds in 1974

AI: young woman dark hair

Twenty-Two Seconds in 1974

Wake up, he whispers in her ear.
She turns over, her eyes unwilling to release the last dusting of sleep.
Those brown eyes of his; those brown eyes.
And he says “Do you trust me?”
“Do I trust the man who drugged me last night? No.” she says.
And then she grins that sort of grin that she can’t suppress.


Written for 6SS “Turn”. Artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text. Imagery and prose/poems ©Misky 2023.

18 responses to “4 November: Twenty-Two Seconds in 1974”

    1. LOL! Thanks, Paul. Nice to see you again. 😀

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      1. My pleasure Misky 🙂

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  1. We Sixarians are often engulfed in the creative fire of stretching the limits of six sentences … so that we forget the potency and impact 60 words can have when masterfully chosen and placed in six sentences.
    Thanks for the reminder, M.

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    1. And since i have the habit of soundtracking Sixes (Denise can speak about that), you will not be spared either😊

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    2. Thank you for your lovely comment. Much appreciated, N.

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  2. Exactly what Nick said; just read mine!
    The perfect write and the perfect 6.
    Sorry, no soundtrack.

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    1. Nick’s soundtrack is still playing as I type, so we’ll just tuck you into the same tune. 🎶

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      1. It’s playing here, too 🎶

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  3. Good point about trust.

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  4. Such an awesome tale with an intriguing twist. Good point about trust indeed.

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    1. Thanks, Astrid!

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  5. That was intriguing. I do not know what you were going for … but to me, you hit the target. 🙂
    https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/11/noir-vember-fallen-world-broken-souls.html

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  6. Very intriguing, Misky. There definitely is more to this story! 🙂

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  7. It seems like she’s saying one thing and thinking another. Interesting!

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    1. It’s an imperfect world, Keith.

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