21 October: We Reigned

AI midjourney, summer; girl jumping off a dock into a lake.
AI Midjourney

We Reigned Over Summer

As a kid, I understood water.
Dive in head-first, water seems hollow.
Feet-first, it’s a brick wall. Sometimes

I’d pretend to be a boat, capsized.
Or an iceberg. Frozen. Stiff. Floating
like a Poohstick. Then I’d wade out
of the shallows, imagine every stone

left dry and parched, fish flapping —
all that water held in my nose and
ears, and my swimming cozzie.

On hot days, my ears could drink-up
a whole ocean view. Just a scattered
wind, and a whip of cloud remained.

And come late September, I’d still be
diving off the dock while the adults
drank gin and tonics on the veranda,
watching us kids with half an eye.


Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

11 responses to “21 October: We Reigned”

  1. Excellent imagery in this

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    1. Ah, thanks so much, Jo. 🥰

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  2. “my ears could drink-up a whole ocean view.”… apart from masterfully poetic it is true also since sound.like smell, are powerful connotation agents.

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    1. Thank you, N. It’s one of those sounds that is etched into me.

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  3. Poohsticks! Watching the water to see whose stick floated out from under the dock first.
    Fantastic writing, sis! Thanks for memories I thought were long forgotten.

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    1. Poohsticks is something that kids don’t do anymore. Pity. And we could play in the street, too, because there were so few cars. Hopefully, you didn’t fall off the dock like I did occasionally! 🤣

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  4. This is great, Misky. You’ve captured those memories so well.

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    1. Thanks, Nicole! That’s lovely to hear.

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  5. It was great fun as an adult, seeing how my daughter loved the water.

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  6. I was caught up in your memories evoked by your fine imagery and lines. Bravo!
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    1. Thank you, Roland! I’ll be around this evening to see what our boy Richard is up to. Hope you had a splendid weekend without complication or stress.

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