18 October: Absolute Furz

What I Saw on the Way to Petworth

Perfect name for a cottage: Blackthorn
A road called Furz.
A 992 should never be lime green.
I doubt I’ll ever see another boomerang-shape cloud.
A hawk is larger than you think, close up.
Poor badger.

After a while, we forgot about death
and how many bricks it’d take to keep a madman under.

He excuses himself,
says he needs the pissouri.
He refuses to use cutesy language
like little boys’ room,
says he’s a grown man
and doesn’t want a toddler size urinal.

He’s off emptying himself –
and I chat with his wife.
We’ve been besties for 40-plus-years.

Says he won’t die from it; he’ll die with it.
Colds are deadly though.
He can catch a virus if someone in the next village sneezes.
He’s missing a spleen now.

Everyone’s in a rush, even the scenery.
Cars queued.
Rush hour.
My thoughts are cloistered.
My mobile just pocket-dialled Greece.
Sorry.
Time.
I just want it to stop.


The meaning of furz ©Misky 2023.

9 responses to “18 October: Absolute Furz”

  1. The pace of the poem matches the rush hour. Fragmented images in each different stanza but the whole is the journey.

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    1. Thanks, Petru. Today’s been a journey in itself.

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      1. There’s a song by Van Morrissen (you know his music?) called “Mama told me there’ll be days like this”! I often take consolation in that.

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        1. I absolutely DO know his music. Fabulous.

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  2. Many of my blood runs are like that! You created such a flurry of rushed time with your verse. Well done!
    Is the curtain about to fall for poor Richard Blaine? https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/10/the-end-is-beginning.html

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    1. Thanks, Roland! I won’t worry too much about Richard; a few weeks ago he was saddled up with Patton!

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  3. yeah, people will do that.

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  4. Immersed and focused you were, as the day demanded.
    Sometimes universe speaks through pockets.

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    1. Well my pocket has some nerve.

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