28 September: Haibun Monday “Equinox”

AI art: woman in a black dress sitting in a yellow chair, red background, slightly abstract
AI MJ

Autumn’s winter came last night. September’s departing with a rip. Trees undressed of their fiery colour. A storm blows through. This one has a name. Agnes. A woman. As though a storm might sit in a chair in a secluded corner, cross her legs in a most delicate and enticing way, sweet as dripping honey. She might light a cigarette and delight in watching it suffer, smoke and burn. Our Agnes, she’s a cruel voice, a swirling vicious yawn with a recognisable naked eye. Her rain shines through vellum clouds. It’s a bad omen out there, the optics are all wrong – leaves ripped and shredded. Silent serenity cast out of glory. Agnes, have mercy.

wind of snarling trumpets
frosted clouds of white faced sheep
a storm’s in her heart


Written for Frank’s dVerse Haibun Monday: Equinox . Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

12 responses to “28 September: Haibun Monday “Equinox””

  1. At least this way naming weather phenomena makes sense… 🌬

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    1. It was a whopper of a storm. Blew off toward Germany and Denmark overnight. At least I won’t have to rake the lawn – all the leaves blew into the next county. Good morning, Nick!

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  2. Thee was once a nun in our choir named Sr Agnes Elizabeth.
    She was fearsome and we were all afraid of her –
    even the adults.
    Morning, sis.

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  3. Great writing. The Haiku is fabulous. Didn’t you have a storm called Agnes a couple of years ago too?? Strong sense of des ja vu.

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    1. Thank you. The storm names are given alphabetically so it’s entirely possible that Agnes is a recycled storm name. So years the names are all female, and other years it’s all male. I’m not sure what it’s going to be this year.

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  4. Lovely poem Misky.
    I am reminded of that old joke. “Why are hurricanes always named after women? (they used to be). Answer, “Have you ever heard of a heicane?”

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  5. That image is truly stunning. Here in Lake Charles, the female hurricanes like Katrina, Rita, and Laura all devastated this city. Sigh. Mother Nature can sometimes be cruel and impersonal.
    https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/09/beware-of-shadows-bearing-gifts.html

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    1. And those ladies would shrug and say, It’s nothing personal, luv.” I’ll be around to yours tonight.

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