21 September: Idling Thoughts on a Road Trip

20.09.23

09:00
He’s refusing to talk. You’re writing down everything I say. No, I’m not, I tell him. I didn’t write what you said about your foot itching yesterday. Well, okay, I have now, but you forced my hand.

09:01
He has an adorable grin. I love to hear him laugh.

10:50
He and I have been through mirrors and years, clouds and tall grasses. Wind at our back. I am more than half gone, I say, 72 is a weird number.

13:00
Stood under a tree, sheltered from a sharp shower. Ate something breadish with icing and cinnamon, flakes of crumb lifted away in the wind.

13:01
You have crumbs on your chest, he says. So do you, I add. He brushes them away as if they might ignite his clothing.

15:05 (The Viking Museum)
There’s an old king buried here. In his long boat. From a tree, split and slick. Can’t tell his bones from the ship’s ribs. Time is petrified into a dark mass. A king who once wore blood and thirst as a badge.

15:45
The old king’s world is erased under a plough. Time and light and river deep. Buried by a fjord. A mound of soil and stones that kept him.

17:00
I am mere blink and stutter, unlike the Viking king who is forever King.


©Misky 2023.

17 responses to “21 September: Idling Thoughts on a Road Trip”

  1. 9.00 No one said it’s easy being a poet’s muse.

    9.01 – 10.50 In the heart of creation, laughter and tears.

    13.01 He is just leaving a snack for the sparrows that follow.

    15.00 – 17.00 Kings, Queens and their chess games… no tomb or statue for the master builder of that beautiful longship

    9… my favorite number.

    🤗

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    1. Good morning, Nick! And 9 is cosmic. 🥰

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  2. Esther Bradley-deTally avatar
    Esther Bradley-deTally

    Wow such good stuff. Fabulous

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    1. Thank you! 🥰

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  3. 9:00 – 😂
    9:01 – 😊
    10:50 – Ditto
    17:00 – You will never be mere blink and stutter
    Now in NY – ❤︎
    We’re the fortunate ones

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    1. We are absolutely the lucky ones.

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  4. I love your description of the way one walks through life with a partner. Time does seem to evaporate the older you get.

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  5. Thank you. Made my morning.

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    1. Ands you’ve made my day, b.

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  6. You and I are the same weird number. I love the line “A king who once wore blood and thirst as a badge.” Like the Sicilian Storyteller wrote — you will never be mere blink and stutter, any more than Emily Dickinson is. 🙂 And a king is only a king for as long as later generations remember him as such. Of course, there is always Ozymandias!
    https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/09/the-partys-over-line.html

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    1. Good old Percy. I love that poem: Ozymandias. The man’s quill reduces me to a mental midget (as in a midge).

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