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3 September: For Tom’s Pioneer Poem Form

AI art. girl looking at the night sky and counting stars
AI MJ

Reading Stars

she is reading stars
wee pin quick wishes,
or song birds singing
for sun and shadow.
each star of night will
reach the moon and sea
wee pin quick wishes
she is reading stars

Tom’s Pioneer poem form axxxx, axxxx, bxxxx, bxxxx, cxxxx, cxxxx, axxxx, axxxx and max 5 syllables per line. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

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13 responses to “3 September: For Tom’s Pioneer Poem Form”

  1. ben Alexander avatar
    ben Alexander

    cool; fun new form, and perfectly executed!

    (you may have forgotten to include some of the rules, beyond the rhyme scheme itself…)

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      I’ll fix that later.

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      1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar
        The Sicilian Storyteller

        What rules were forgotten?
        Looks perfect to me.

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  2. Tom avatar
    Tom

    Oh, I like this one, Misky! 👍🙂
    Nice and gentle… subtle, in fact!

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thanks, Tom!

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  3. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar
    The Sicilian Storyteller

    Love this, sis! 🌟

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Thank you, sis! Good morning. ❤️

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      1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar
        The Sicilian Storyteller

        And a good day to you ❣️

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        1. Misky avatar
          Misky

          It’s getting too hot here. I fear I might do that spontaneous human combustion thingy like Krook did in Bleak House.

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  4. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar
    The Sicilian Storyteller

    🤣 Bill and I went for our walk at 9:45. It was already uncomfortably hot, humid and very still. We’re inside now and here’s where we shall stay for the rest of the day. 🥵

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    1. Misky avatar
      Misky

      Peder says it’s too hot to cook, so we’re going out. Yeah!!

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      1. The Sicilian Storyteller avatar
        The Sicilian Storyteller

        What a mench! He’s right!
        We’re doing Caesar salads with shrimp for dinner.

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  5. Frewin55 avatar
    Frewin55

    That’s a fun form and I like what you did with it…

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