31 August: A dVerse Ought Not Haibun

Girl in a red coat and black hat looking at a black dog. Art in naive-core style.
AI MJ

Ought Not

I’m not sure about the year, but it was the summer that Mum painted the porch stairs emerald green. Greener than jade. And shiny enamel. I thought it looked like Amazon tree frog green. And she hung eight baskets of trailing fuchsias and forget-me-nots from the eaves off the back porch, as if, Dad said, one basket wasn’t enough. And the lily-of-the-valley bloomed under the bowed bay-window, a deep scent that seduced the air with toxic sweetness … like embalming fluid, not that I’d ever smelled it, but I doubt it’s stinky because a dead body goes stinky quick enough. And that summer my little sister taught ants to swim in an old jam jar, and I fell off my bike and cracked a rib. But mostly it was the summer that Laureen’s black Labrador bit me. Twice. As if, Dad said, once wasn’t enough. I mean who names their dog “Ought Not”, and then expects a happy outcome.

Mornings seemed greener
Butter was kilowatt bright
We were ancient clouds


A Haibun poem. Inspired by a prompt from dVerse Poets about siblings. I won’t be posting on dVerse as this piece is a bit off track from the instruction. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

16 responses to “31 August: A dVerse Ought Not Haibun”

  1. twice? jeez!

    kilowatt bright

    love this phrasing too!


    David

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    1. Twice in the same week. The second time he sprung at me out of nowhere while I was on the swings. I’ve been around dogs my whole life, and to this day I still don’t know what I did to set him off.

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  2. I guess Ought Not tried to conform you,M, from an early age… failed miserably, right?
    Love, what I have come to recognize as, your sensational poetry… all senses in play.

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    1. Good afternoon, Nick. Ought Not lived a long and happy life, just like me. We became good friends a few years later. I honestly don’t know what I did to set him off. Funny thing is, my best friend has a dog that’s the spitting image of Ought Not. His name is Hector. He’s a massive bruiser of a dog, and gentle as a leaf.

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      1. Hey, M – a very good afternoon to you, too. I know exactly what you mean. (Don’t know if we had the chance to talk about it, but I am a dog person… deeply ( i never said I have a dog – instead I was my dog;s human).

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        1. I think I’ve read (or assumed) your great affection for dogs. My dogs, Nick, were my friends, companions, and I saw them as my equals as I do with all my friends. We looked after each other. My last dog is my final dog as I don’t think my heart can withstand breaking like that again.

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          1. I hear you… loud & clear.
            It’s been 21 years since my Snoopy was killed and I still haven’t moved on.

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  3. I love the rich visual imagery in this.

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    1. Thanks so much, Jo. I can still see those shiny green steps.

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  4. You have a wonderful ability to develop such keen images. I enjoyed reading this. I felt like I could have been sitting on the porch breathing in the scents and I could see your Dad nod his head each time he said “as if…wasn’t enough”.

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    1. That is the best possible comment ever!

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  5. A feast for the eyes and nose Misky – so vivid, and then the dog bites – didn’t see that coming…

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  6. “Ought Not” is a great name for a dog. Did they say the full name when they called him? I feel as if I’m listening to you tell God a memory of your childhood with this. It made me smile after a long day of bringing blood to the ill. 🙂 https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/08/march-of-perserverance.html

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    1. His full name, absolutely, Roland. Funny how some memories are just glued to your bones, and this is sure one of them.

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