22 August: The Goatherd 4

AI artwork: black goat, a woman in traditional Kenyan clothing seated with a milk container
AI MJ

4. When She Sees the Goats

She sees the goats
before she sees the man.

A white goat
leaping about like a small moth.

A black one
studying branches of an Argan tree.

She leans down and draws milk
from its tit into her cupped hand.

It trickles between her fingers,
warm and rich,
the colour of pale butter.

She once felt happiness
when running wild with the whispers
of winter wind.

She thought that this was very close.


Total words: 114. #4 (draft) of The Goatherd. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned as AI. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

10 responses to “22 August: The Goatherd 4”

  1. Loving these images ur using.

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    1. I’m delighted that you like them, P. It’s a constant learning process, and I’m enjoying the challenge.

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      1. I’m finding that a lot of what it gives me, I don’t like. It’s got so I look on Deviant, because many people post their good images there.

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  2. Writing whether poetry or prose is always a learning experience … if we wish to grow that is. 🙂 Still alive but more tropical storms are heading my way. Sigh. This season is a trying one for us who live and work here. https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/08/deja-voodoo.html

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    1. I see there’s another one hitting Haiti.

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  3. All senses engaged in this one, M. And an underlined longing…
    Deeper it goes (you go) with every step.

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    1. Have I mentioned that you’re good for my ink?

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  4. We went to Morocco a few years ago and saw goats amongst the Argan trees but it was the wrong season for them to be climbing them to eat the fruit.
    Very evocative poem and I am in awe of how you bend Midjourney to your will…

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    1. It must be amazing to see it in person. I’ve seen the goats up the trees on telly – incredible.

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