19 August: The Goatherd 2

AI artwork. Woman with a donkey and cart in African landscape with hut in the background
AI MJ

2. When She Was Just a Girl (Draft)

School left her behind, silent and different,
never feeling very dear around herself.

She said she was like first people, simple
in needs, and silent in her own thoughts,

and she wanted someone real like her,
someone who wouldn’t walk backwards.

She tied a donkey to her wooden cart,
and put her steely trust in all their feet.

And she walked away the days in hot
African bush just like she was someone,

the red dust rising up like African paprika.


These posts are drafts, and not necessarily in sequential order. Some artwork is created using Midjourney AI, and is identified as such in the ALT text or captioned. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

9 responses to “19 August: The Goatherd 2”

  1. The last line is excellent Misky 🙂

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    1. Thank you, Brian! 😁

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  2. The entire poem is poignant. My heart goes out to the girl. People are so often blind. The Last Line was great though. 🙂 https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/08/denying-reality.html

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    1. As you know, Roland, we can write them into better circumstances. ❤️

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  3. That is what I do with my historical fantasies, righting the wrongs of those who do not care for the small ones. 🙂 https://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2023/08/ours-not-to-question-why.html

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    1. We do try! 🥰

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  4. Tuning in to your Muse, you are.
    Slowly, affectionately.

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    1. Yes, slowly. She needed a backstory, Nick. Everyone needs to claim their own story.

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      1. Mythos is essential… (and I have been very protective of the mythos and ethos of my in- serial- character, the Gatekeeper).

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